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"Finding it, though... That's not the hard part. It's letting go."

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Flitter loves her twin sister, Cloudchaser, more than anything in the world. The two were inseparable for as long as they could remember, helping each other through times of trouble and cherishing their joyous moments together—one half that completes the other.

But Flitter had never imagined losing Cloudchaser forever. Without her sister, she feels that everything had suddenly become darker, more hollow, as though something inside her had died as well. Though it is difficult, she must find the strength and will to somehow push past the grief and emptiness and carry on in a life without her other half...

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 13 )

I'll have to read this soon.

I have a twin bro who is my best friend in the world, if he died I don't think I would be able to live anymore.
Don't know if I can handle reading this or not.

The writing is decent and the premise is promising---definitely following this.

This is really good.I'm following this story

Not that you have to listen to me, but if you are uncertain of where to take this I think there is still plenty of unresolved tension between Flitter and Rainbow Dash. :twilightsmile: Might be where you want to start.

Anyway, loved the chapter, Cloudchaser is my favorite background pony, so this story carries a lot of weight for me, keep up the good work!

This chapter is wonderful, Cloudchaser is one of my favourite ponies and Flitter has also risen to the top of my list (quite frankly due to fanfiction that's given me a better head canon when it comes to what she's like).
Anyway, this seems very promising and I hope you decide to continue it someday.

I think your doing fine with this I love tragedies

:fluttershysad:
this realy tugged my heartstrings

I really like this fic; you are a brilliant writer and this is very well written in my point of view. I love how detailed your writing is and I will be sure to read the next update.

The character's aren't OoC, it's just a suffocating situation for everyone here. I liked how Rainbow blamed herself for what happened. You're doing great, and I would love to see more.

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