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Azuras


Just an avereage person who enjoys MLP and occasonly Wirting

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Twilight, the bearer of the Element of Magic and newest Princess of Equestria sent to investigate the discovery of the century. Beings fourth old questions she had as a filly and sets her on a path of discovery to uncover the mysteries of the world.

She will travel the lands finding evidence to support wild claims and proof that History is not what it once seemed. Alliances will be made, old enemies shall rise, but in the end the Truth will be found.

What she finds, may be more then she can handle and may have been forgotten for a Reason.

Chapters (14)
Comments ( 26 )

In the description:

Twilight, the barrier of the Element of Magic

I think you meant 'bearer'.


5137537 Wow... Didn't notice that, thanks mate.

I´ve seen several stories with this idea,but they are all mostly the same -cliche.
I wonder if this story will be different.

small inconsistency when you first discripted the guard escort last chapter it consisted of two crystal ponies, two pegsi, and one unicorn mare but when they introduced themselves it had changed to one earth pony, two pegsi and two unicorn mares.

Comment posted by Azuras deleted Nov 4th, 2015

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Oh... Welp that's pretty bad... Since I'm editing alot of the previous chapters anyways I'll go back and fix that.

Thanks for pointing it out.

And we are hoping it'll cut through this hear door.

this here door

"Anything I can do?" She asks s

Extra hanging s. It also needs a period at the end.

whirling sound Ian

Lan?

Also this chapter is missing a number of commas at the end of dialog.

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Thanks again. :twilightsmile:

I am loving this story!!! :)

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Thanks, Hope you'll enjoy the new chapters :twilightsmile:

An AI? Things just got awesomely interesting!!! Lol

You are going to say what the questionable content is, right?

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Talking about use of harsh language and descriptive violence. But Sex wouldn't be a thing.... if there's that then it has to be M. But I'll edit it so people don't get the wrong idea

"Inheritance" is this a crossover with Eragon? :moustache:

This story is awesome!!! Wonder if they'll find any humans still alive. :)

This story is awesome! Keep it up dude! :)

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Thank you for the kind words. I'll hopefully have the next chapter out soon been busy with school and work.

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Your welcome! :)
Are humans still around? I think they are, cause think about it. They have this underground base full of everything one might need to restart civilization. So shouldn't their be people that would use this? The base is huge there's probably a stasis area or cryo tubes with people in it, I mean if thier advance enough to build robots, AI, and stuff they must have that, right? Plus what happened to the people with the camera? Thier vehicle was found but no bodies....makes you think where did they go? Lol

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Well, we are just going to have to wait and find out. I plan on this being a good long ride which hopefully everyone can enjoy. Unfortunately, due to real world. Been busy.

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Indeed it is!

Very good to see this back and still updating. Xd
I don't know what to think about sombra and his story but I am willing to listen with a open mind.
Besides a bit of grammar errors throughout the chapters this story is AWESOME and look forward to reading more!!!:pinkiehappy:

I wonder what happened to the Human race? Are there any survivors alive?

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Good to here. However I'll probably be editing this in the future to get more of those errors out.

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Going to need to find out aren't we?

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