Everyone Needs a Friend, Sometimes

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The Great and Powerful Trixie decides it's time to give back.

Because everyone needs a friend, don't they?

Proofread and edited by the wonderfully helpful OneWingedDevil, who I found with the help of the Author Support group.

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Rocket

Rocket #1 · Oct 18th, 2014 · · ·

An enjoyable story, but I really don't think the editor's notes at the end were meant to be left there.

CluelessBrony

CluelessBrony #2 · Oct 18th, 2014 · · ·

5155706

*Sigh* Uploading from Gdocs is a bit iffy, it would seem. That wasn't even on the document, it was just in the comments. I have no idea why it was there at all. Oh well, thanks for pointing it out. I never would have caught it otherwise.

Rocket

Rocket #3 · Oct 18th, 2014 · · ·

5155714 You're quite welcome.

Ponymeat

Ponymeat #4 · Oct 19th, 2014 · 1 · ·

And this is why you do not summon some kind of demon with no intentions. It's not the fact its a force of evil, or that it could require a major sacrifice of one's soul or something else they care about, or even the fact that stories of demons usually end with them going back on their word and having an ironic twist on what the summoner wanted. It's the awkward moments.

Mooncalf

Mooncalf #5 · Oct 19th, 2014 · 2 · ·

Good story. Well-written and well-paced. Plenty of detail to the execution of it, and then the ending... heh. Yes, I suppose it would be in character for Trixie to subdue and bind an ancient demon - with her own soul on the line - just to prove to herself that she could do it. Much liked.

NixWorld

NixWorld #6 · Oct 26th, 2014 · · ·

Here is a review:
Pros:
You explained the story in great detail with a great choice of various words.
The story itself was interesting.
The ending was delightful and funny.
Cons:
Some paragraphing issues and also just a few separating issues.

I think you should re-read the story a few more times before fully submitting it. And if you have doubts when you already submitted, you can always edit it why its out. Apart from that this story is amazing.
Keep up the good work!

LordChumley21