• Member Since 4th May, 2014
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xStellar_Bubbles


A derp trying to make sense of reality.

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Ever since she enrolled in the Canterlot School for Gifted Unicorns, Twilight Sparkle devoted her life to the ways of magic. But after she takes a test about it, she gets a score that wasn't up to her own standards.

Special thanks to both Subject 19 and Rainbow FlutterDash for proofreading for me! You guys are awesome!

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Comments ( 12 )

Could use an edit or two or ten.
Kinda hard to read, ya just need to have an editor go through and clean it up in some spots.

Why doesn't this story have a comedy tag?

Cute. :rainbowkiss: Short and sweet.:twilightsmile: I liked it! :pinkiehappy:

7622846 Can you tell me where, then?
7622891 Say what. :derpyderp2:
7622919 I tried. :rainbowlaugh:
7622971 Because it's not a comedy.
7623018 Thanks a ton, I'm glad you think so! :pinkiehappy:

:twilightoops: Spike ate my study notes

:twilightangry2: Spike burned my lesson plans

:twilightsheepish: Spike clawed my books

:twilightblush: Spike made me tardy

years later

:twilightoops: Spike what did you do to Rarity? :moustache: Ffffffrrrrrrriiiiiieeeeeennnnndddddsssshhhhhiiiiiiippp?:heart::raritystarry:

:trollestia: Twilight Spike studied your friendship lessons too :facehoof: too far?

7623109 all of the dialog and narration :moustache:

7623699 You're not being specific.

7623993 *boop* the whole story needs a good once over is what I'm saying.

Sweet. Poor Twily. Very good lesson from Celestia.

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