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SPark


Not checking in here. I may post stories because my patrons are nice and like ponies. Otherwise out of the fandom, sorry peeps.

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Spike always knew he would lose her. He just never guessed it would be so soon...

(Just something short I wrote, because for me, grief always demands that I create. Cover sketch is by me as well.)

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This... was beautiful. It made me cry. I'm sorry for your loss, though I doubt that means much. All the same, lovely story.

Comment posted by meepify deleted Oct 11th, 2014

"Twilight will not outlive her friends." -Meagan McCarthy.

5125208 *nods* That is part of what I was thinking about when I decided to use Twilight for this story.

Good story, sorry for your lost, but. I'm curious to what the user who comment got deleted said.

5125138 Thank you.

I'm sorry for your loss. My grandfather passed away a little over a month ago and this really describes how the whole family feels.

You never get over the pain, you just make room for it and try to remember the good times.
Stay strong.

Very lovely, but I've never understood why people think Twilight is a lesser Alicorn. But anyway, you'll probably never be ready to lose a loved one and being remembered fondly is the best immortality, IMHO.

5125208
Ah yes, I did forget about that. Of course it could also mean they become immortal or as long lived.

This had just the right amount of everything. Thank you for writing this.

5125287 Whether I think of Twi as a lesser alicorn or not has to do with the kind of story I'm writing. For this one it was what worked.

5125502 Thank you.

5125240 Nothing horribly offensive. Just nothing I felt like dealing with right now, either.

This was absolutely beautifully written.

tears have been shed...:applecry::applecry:


all in all a great story

The worst part of loss is it being almost 8 years later and you still cry when certain things remind you. Or when you realize you put her in the outline of a story. I`m sorry for your loss. Remebering hurts but they never go away as long as you do.

5129122 Thank you.

A Sad Story, Awesomely Written By An Author Who Feels So. I Hath Wish That Winds Blow By, Yet Let You Live Peacefully, Remembering You Sorrowful Loss. I Wish You Can Move On Peacefully, And Carry On, Unhurting For Your Loss.



~ Blue Sky

Heart-wrenching. I loved it.

Damnit...Ironically, I really wish this actually managed to make me cry
Guess I'm too used to the concept

Heavy stuff, great story.

It does stops hurting quite so much eventually, though that never goes away entirely either.

I like it but how did Twilight die?

I like the concept of Spike meeting a dragoness during a migration. I'm currently writing a story where he did the same thing, except they already left Ponyville and have had several clutches of hatchlings. I like Spike. He's one of my favorites. Discord and Fluttershy get tops, though.

Aw... Sad story, but great job. Very well written, it almost perfectly highlights feelings felt when a loved one dies.

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