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Cyber System


Hey, there! My name's Cyber System. My main focus for stories are rarely touched topics or just ideas that came to me. Not much to say other than that.

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This story is a sequel to The Misfits


Equestria is faced with a new enemy, one that may destroy the peaceful land, even Celestia is faced with difficulty and seeks those who will save Equestria.

Are The Misfits destined to save Equestria? No... but that won't stop them from doing the best they can to help.

Polite criticism accepted. Not a self-insert.

Previous knowledge of The Misfits is not needed, but it is recommended to read the prequel to better understand characters and events.

In need of a cover art and an editor/proofreader.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 19 )

Please tell me what I'm doing wrong.

5107196 Don't feed the parasprite, Cyber! Some people put a dislike because of trolling issues that they can't control! You're doing nothing wrong! I'll be with you always and I'll support you till the very end so do go on!

5109468 thanks, man. I admit I'm a bit overreacting. But it's nice to know that I've got a good friend to back me up

5110078 Y'know, you're not overreacting at all: I've deleted sooo many fics because of trolls like that with 0 likes / 3 dislikes. I said maybe they hated backstories, maybe they hated anime-based fanfics. But no! They don't comment, they don't give a damn. Y'know what I wish, I wish for a system that allows the author to see the names of who likes and who dislikes a fic because I hate people giving dislikes with no reason at all because they either upset or demoralize the author.

5110674 agreed, though I also wish people would express their opinion more often. I need the comments

Oh man! I really gotta step up my game!

Correct "Astronomy" by the way!

5118878 well, some people are more busy than others. I don't have much to do since I'm in my first week of fall break at school.

There are some keyboard derps in this chapter! But still continue!

Oh my! You're alive, unlike me! And a new Misfit OC! Congrats man! I don't know... this laziness is really a sin of me! I think that my sin is Sloth now!

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I'm so happy! Things will be interesting with pineapple

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Oh trust me! Things will be interesting when I finish Laa-Mohr's backstory too! I'm gonna publish now don't worry!

Glad to see you're alive! Oh man how much I missed you! I told you about my idea to destroy that block. I can wait don't worry!

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Remind me what that idea was again?

5867627 I PM'ed you! Also I will finish my OC's story in 3 to 4 chapters! It won't be that long!

NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!! The curse of Hiatus! I blame you Laa-Mohr!!!!! XD Great series btw, I hope someday this will continue! So many exclamation points!

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