After receiving an urgent letter from Pokey Pierce, Big Macintosh seeks answers on his own as Pokey and others try to find their way through one of life's greatest challenges: lurv.
A silly shipping story with a slight hint of the macabre.
Now with more edits!
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I can already see how this might not end well...
Well, that sucks.
Hold on, what?
...Oh.
Oh shit.
I don't know much of Chtulhu Mythos, but I do believe I know enough to understand this story, especially since you also practically explained everything in it.
That being said, I really loved this! It is very amusing, it gave me a really good laugh a couple of times and it is pretty well written, too.
I love the pairings and the way you dealt with them.
And then... dat ending. :B
It is a very good twist, but oh that ending. xD It both irritated me and amused me at the same time; I can't see it ending anyway differently and I can't see how would this develop in the imaginary sequel, yet I WANT a sequel and WANT a conclusion; even though it is fairly obvious this story isn't meant to have one.
Awesome story, dear Sir! 6/5 mustaches!
I do have to wonder though; how did you come up with this?? XD
This is where I give this story a thumbs up.
I found this chapter hilariously wacky. Pokey is coconuts!!!
He's lucky, geddit?
I'm glad people seem to be liking my first FIM fanfic.
As far as explaining everything in the Cthulhu Mythos, I only parodied one short story. You have a lot to look forward to if you pick up one of H.P.'s books. (If you can get past the hints of racism, and the fact that in the 1920s I guess twist endings were harder to spot; a lack of subtlety I also tried to mimic.)
Oh, and about how I came up with it: I noticed fan-artists often color Pokey's eyes yellow, but in the show when he finally opens his eyes they're green . This confusion was my inspiration. (In reality, they are mixing him up with a yellow-eyed Time Lord pony that looks very similar to him.)
... GET IN THE CART BOYS!!! WE GOT OURSELVES A BIG ORDER TO FILL!!!
wow this is pretty good so far
This story has gone through some edits.
You!!
I love your cynical tone, especially the life is scary bit. You should write more
Your comments give me strength.
I LOVE THIS PARINING! And this to
Hah, dat flank, right?
Straightforward.
What.
What did I just read? XD
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Actually, Pokey's eyes are yellow. Well, not exactly yellow, more like hazel.
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Oh Lawd, not the Cobras! Quick, someone get me the fainting couch; I'm catching the vapors!
Daw, that reminds me of the first time I asked Rebbecca out on a date. She laughed at me and said "About time you asked!" Apparently it was so obvious even she saw it... >.>