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The Story Man
I'm posting some of my stories from the /fb/ general on /mlp/ and I'll be writing some other stuff from time to time.
The Story Man
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A female Anon story? This I like!
Why do I read these during worrrrrrrrk?
Eh, was very good indeed!
~Skeeter The Lurker
Adorkable Twilight is always a win, plus you don´t see female Anon often. Really well writen story.
Please take my like and fave.
This was oddly adorable, even though reading second person that's not choose-your-own-adventure is always a very surreal experience.
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Indeed, a clop story doesn't often evoke d'aww in me.
Glad to see that there are exceptions though
...you read a story with the help of someone else?.....
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No, the story was written by someone else that was helped by their girlfriend.
5078542 ah...
u need work with the proper place to us the word "too." also, for women, orgasms r less about 1 big climax and more about building multiple climaxes onto one another...men r limited by a refractory period after orgasm, but women can usually go for several before feeling the need to rest and cuddle for a few minutes. having twilight and anon each need to quiet down and cuddle for a while after their first orgasms is sort of a male-centric perspective on sex
overall tho this was very nice, its written decently and feels fairly in character, its cute, its sexy, and the lack of stories for female anons is criminal; us girls like ponies too lol!, so this is really great to see and read. thandks for writing it!
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Well, as I said, I'm just a guy doing this.
Still, the feedback is nice in-case I write any stories with more lesbians or even more fem-anon. Since you're helping, what did you think of the descriptions of their bodies? I didn't want them to sound to excessive, but I wanted to emphasize that fem-anon was bigger than Twi both in height and curves.
Glad for the feedback, and hope you'll read more.
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You're playing a dangerous game, my friend.
5078917 damn you biology, you ruin everything!!!
5079285 the description of the bodies....thats kind of hard to say exactly. i mean u did a fine job, but if what ur asking about is whether it seemed realistically female in its perspective, then...yes and no, i'd say. u put an emphasis on bust and butt, with less focus on other parts of the body, or the body as a whole. when im with a woman, breasts and ass r certainly things im interested in, but im focused on much more then just them...for example i had a girl i saw off and on again a while back who had just the most beautiful collar and shoulders u can imagine, hard to describe what it was about that part of her body that was so much better than other people's but it was just curved art in motion. she had a nice chest, a-cup which is probably my favorite, but i usually paid almost no attention there, i was always so set on kissing and stimulating her collar and neck and shoulders and such. thats what i mean, is that a female perspective is usually appreciative of a woman in a broader artistic sense, not as focused on the parts that a male perspective usually cant get past. so, more description of specific characteristics of body would probly be good
but on the other hand, ive been with and i know plenty of girls who do have as singleminded a focus on tits and ass as a steteotypical frat douchebag, lol. so is this story less realistic for a focus on those parts? not exactly.
i do wanna say that twi's boob shame is a little much. anime tries to tell us that any time a girl sees another girl whose bustier then her, she becomes embarrassed of herself, but thats just not true....and even when a girl does feel she has inferior bust size, it doesnt usually come up as a major point of conversation during sex, lol, at least not in my experiences. still, it doesnt feel totally out of place for shy twi here so its not really a problem, either.
anyway ill be happy to read more stories of urs, but i think the other anon stories uve done are about male anons, right? thats not my thing, sorry. ill be happy to read more female anon stories by u if u do any in the future tho, let me know if it happens. their very rare and usually a real treat, and so many super sexy ladies from fim like zecora and celestia dont have any female anon stories for them that i know of so im always on the lookout for new ones!
Cute story.
Female anon is an interesting choice.
Adorable Twilight for the win.
k
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Interesting.
So are there any characters you'd like to see in particular?
Also, what would be something you'd like to see in another fem-anon story?
"spine"
5079676 well since ur asking, i woudl kill to have a femanon x zecora story...pony, human, halfway, doesnt matter what form zecora takes, shes incredibly hot. im also very interested in celestia and especially sweetie belle (most ppl dont wanna do that tho lol, so i dont expect ill ever see one), and applejack is hella sexy but there've been enough stories with her that i feel satisfied with her.
stuff id wanna see, well, i am very into genital and nipple piercings (and they r FUN to have believe me!) and of course tongue piercings can be absolutely amazing for ur partner...i also really like feet and/or hooves, but ppl arent always into that so i wouldnt expect it or anything. really tho, i'd just love to see any more femanon stories, so u coudl do whatever and id probably be happy lol! its very very very nice of u to ask tho, pls let me know if u do any more of these!
Still not that much of a fan of second person anon, especially jarring since it's hard to translate "you" into female even though I'm male, but hot as always.
I would have preferred a simple "I" first person which would have been much better IMO, but this fic is still great.
Plus, Twilight was done really well.
is this one shot?
There aren't any other two words I hate more then the end, especially in caps.
Okay, I hate to resort to basic language like this but...Kawai!
Seriously, the interactions between these two is so sweet and so nerdy that it's absolutely perfect. It was innocent, it was passionate, and it's everything I'd expect from Twilight Sparkle. Great job.
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Hey, I don't put it in and the people start jumping at me for sequels man.
A writer's gotta do, what a writer's gotta do.
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It would be awesome if you made one though.
But one does not simply write, I guess.
5080283
If I wrote a sequel for every story that got asked for one, I'd never write a new story again.
Sometimes you just have to try something new.
5080318
Yeah I see what you mean.
But if you could ever come back to this that would be nice
5080331
I suppose. I already have quite the backlog, so I wouldn't get to it for a while. Not to mention I already have a sequel fic to write.
Besides, as I said in some other comment replies, if I were to write more fem-anon it would likely be in another scenario with a different character.
Gosh, that was adorable!
As it happens, I am a girl, and I was doing physics homework when I decided to take a break and read some random fan fiction. Needless to say, I was really quite amused. [Spoiler alert: There wasn't enough information to complete the Lex Luthor question!]
It was really adorable, and I really enjoyed it a lot.
Back to my physics homework, now!
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Assume Lex Luthor weighs around 90 kg. Superman will arrive to stop him after his lunch, so he will be there in 20 minutes.
Hint: Try to remember, it's one cake a minute relative to Lex Luthor.
5080370
Oh ok.
Great work anyway, keep it up!
Achievement get: Hardc0r3 Follower!
A shame it isn't pony-on-human, though.
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Oh wow this was sooo adorable and cute and sexy all wrapped into one. Their confession of love for eachother, that was so beautiful I nearly cried. This was so good. I know some people have pointed out some issues with this story, but I think they're minor at best, I enjoyed it a lot.
5080417 Whoops, forgot to include that in my QK (quantitative key)!
story man. you have never let me down with a bad story. and you aint this time. keep up the good work
*leans back in chair* DAYUM, THATS HOT
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That's because I write human stories only.
Course, I am writing a pony story for Halloween, but that's a ways away.
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[dayum shame intensifies]
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lesboes ima read the fuck outta this
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Finally, a story written with a female anon! Thank you for considering us random females around the fandom
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No problem.
Actually wrote this with more of a "guy into lesbians" perspective. Surprised to see the number of women here, if I'm being honest.
I'm a sapiosexual, so I was more aroused about solving that question than the rest of the fanfic. Everything else was great but...mmm. High level math.
Broken grammar, tired cliches, clunky descriptions, rushed ending and poor spelling, enjoyed it anyway.
A bit more polished and without humans, and I'd be pretty damn happy with this. This kind of thing is to damn rare to hate with the same propensity I usually have.
5082614 You bastard! I almost flipped my laptop, I raised my feet off the floor, and I swear I felt arm tingle just now. NOPE!
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>you right now
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>me right now
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5085974 Bahaha, I'm keeping that Skyrim one!
Also, accurate representation...
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People always like that one.
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Sorry you feel that way.
Though I should warn you, I never write ponies having sex, with humans or other ponies.