In this series of erotic one-shots, mares from across Equestria open up their diaries to a total stranger and reveal their deepest secrets - tales of love, passion, lust, and betrayal.
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That's more like it. Definitely like this one a lot better than the last.
Definitely looking forward to the Rarity story. Fingers crossed....
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6180304 Hey there! Didn't expect to see you in here, lol. ;)
Well, I'll chastise my editor for that, please hold. *berates self in the mirror* Okay, all good. xD
Seriously though, the implication here is that Octavia has dated in the past, but never gotten very physical with it. In the world of this vignette, she's a bit like Twilight in that she's so focused on her work, she gives little credence to a social life, much less dating. That she tried it at all was a bit of a stretch for her, and her experiences left her nonplussed about how other ponies might wish to relate to her in a romantic way. Lyra obviously changed that on her.
Glad you're enjoying things though!
Know what else makes sense, Twilight? AJ asking you or Rainbow to deliver them instead. Ah well. I'll look past it.
Don't be too rough on him. He'll never fly again.
Well, damn, girl. Can I get tickets to that rodeo?
Bruh. Wrote a short review.
I was looking for stories with Twilight Velvet and found your little series. After reading the Velvet chapter I can say that it is well written and dark. It made me feel a little sick ...so congrats on your writing ability I guess. The entire time I was reading I kept hoping there was a twist somewhere like Velvet was under a spell or that there was a super secret sleight of hand that gave the story a more positive spin, like her telling nightlight in the end and they worked it out. I guess some stories are just dark. The suckerpunch was that I looked at the tags (no dark tag) and was not expecting something so raw and visceral. I recommend you place one on the story or at least the chapter please. Overall a good chapter. It made me have a strong reaction. Even if the story is not a joyful one does not mean it was not a good one.
Kinda wish I had not read it. I have the same feeling like after reading a chapter of Celestia's day off or the Fall of Equestria. One chapter was enough for me.
...Except those gave me a heads up.
TLDR: Good writing. Nice work. I am sad now.
6211285 Hi there! Thanks for your comment and feedback! I'm glad you liked the writing, though I'm sorry I made you sad. That's certainly not my intention here, and I do apologize. Your chapter tagging idea is pretty good, so I'll go ahead and do that as well. (and tag any other infidelity chapters, should they occur in the future)
That said, the Velvet chapter is the only infidelity chapter in here now. Everything is else is much 'happier' in tone, comparatively. So, if you're in the mood, please do give a few of the other chapters a try. I think you'll find them more to your liking.
Thanks again for your feedback, and I hope to see you in some other chapters! :)
-GMP
6312558 And while Twily is asleep, the foalsitter will play...
Thanks for the comment! I hope you enjoy the other chapters as well. :)
Am i thinking to much about the description or are you actually asking for chapters?... Knowing me I'm reading to much into it...
6378372 Hi! Thanks for reading and commenting! To answer your question though:
On the surface, the story's description is just a slightly modified/ponified version of the introductory sequence from the actual TV show upon which I'm basing this series. (in the TV show, the person behind the Red Shoe character takes out a newspaper ad to solicit these diaries)
That said though, I'm open to adding additional chapters from 'guest authors', so to speak. Loyal has already provided one here, and Jade Ring is working on a future entry of his own. So, if the mood strikes you now or in the future, let me know!
-GMP
6379219 weeeeeeeell.... I kinda only work with OC's, I mean i use show characters, but the main(s) is/are always OC('s) of mine or a friends creation (or something i was given permission to use). The Characters from the show have kinda been used to death... Then revived and killed again... And then rinse and repeat a couple hundred time! (Aside from a few like Starlight Glimmer... Hey, there's an idea.)
Sooo, yeah, if ocs are fine I'll probably throw you something once i finish these stories for "Fimfic Authors Are In Your Bed"
6379447 Ah, okay. I can understand that. If/when you choose to explore a guest addition, let me know, and I'll be happy to discuss it further. :)
Damn. This is hot. Sex doesn't usually seem to be depicted as hot and sweaty as it actually is, and this is quite a turn on. That, along with the AJ's mane and tail ties coming off. Those were the highlights for me. Oh, and Soarin doing that precision cock maneuver with the tip of his cock. Quite dexterous.
Eheh, I was under the impression they would have sex in midair from the intro. That would be quite the way to overcome AJ's fears.
Also, AJ's back is like a slip n slide :B