In this series of erotic one-shots, mares from across Equestria open up their diaries to a total stranger and reveal their deepest secrets - tales of love, passion, lust, and betrayal.
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Awesome chapter! Wondering if we will see Twilight with Flash, but Sunset works great as well.
Hnnnngh, goddamn. This might be my favorite diary yet. At first glance I was expecting the prompt to be based on that little 'maybe we could start over?' hint between them in EQG4, but this was a solid alternative. I've been liking Sunset/Flash as a pairing a lot more lately, and this gave me another firm nudge in that direction. Excellent, just excellent.
I've also found myself wondering about/wanting to expanding on the setting we glimpse at in some of these stories. I get the sense that they are all pretty disconnected and not (necessarily) in a single continuity, and so it gives a sense that there's a dozen little windows here into whole possible worlds. Nothing quite concrete, though, particularly when I'm still languishing on my own projects, but nevertheless, after that story, I still feel myself wanting to see Sunset report back to Princess Twilight that her loyal guard may be worth a closer look....
Anyway. Bravo again, so glad to see another diary so soon, and I can't wait to see what more stories you have in mind. So many possibilities....
--CG
7805369 Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
7805509 Thank you for the kind words, as always!
You're right, these episodes exist in a sort of mini-vacuum, with no over-arching continuity around them. But, there is a bit of connectivity to be found among them. Specifically:
Episode 5 & 7 -- These two are linked, with episode 7 following directly from the events of episode 5.
Episode 8 -- No connection to other RSD chapters, but it does exist as a extension of the universe created by Grimm's story 'Mis-shapes'
Episode 11 -- No connection to other RSD chapters, but it does expand on the background/world of FoxInShadow's OC
Episode ?? -- A future episode already in progress, this one will exist in the universe created by Loyal's story 'Moonstone'
Episode ?? -- Also a future episode, this one will follow directly from the events of my story, 'Night Rose'
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*looks it up*
.....so Velvet cheating in your story is because Night Light is fucking Twilight in THIS story?
That.....is some interesting context I did not have at the time.
7806498 Tbh, I can't recall exactly. Two things I do remember though:
1. What I wrote isn't 'official' to Grimm's story, to be clear. Though I did get his permission to riff on his story's universe. What I did is more of filling in a small bit of background that his story left vague.
2. iirc, in his fic, Light and Velvet are both aware of the other's unfaithfulness. They just don't know with whom.
Good chapter. :) I'd love for Sunset to show up in the regular show.
7948098 Thanks for the comment, and for continuing to read the series. I appreciate it! :)
And seriously, thanks for being frank with your feedback. The Twilight Velvet chapter was indeed a darker turn for the story overall, thus the cautionary note at the top of the chapter. The infidelity angle there is actually close to the norm for the TV show upon which this is based (where nearly every 'red shoes' entry was a tale of infidelity) But your point is well taken - cheating doesn't read quite as light hearted as one-night stands. ;)
Also, I'm glad you liked the Sunset chapter so much! That was one of my favorite ones to write. :)
7952400 Works for me. :)
7951880 Yeah, the Velvet chapter really upset me and ticked me off, which is what you were going for, so well done.
I recovered though.
Some ideas i have for pairings are cloudchaser and her sister flitter. Rainbow dash and lightning dust. Big mac n fluttershy spicing up their sex life and inviting marble pie into their bedroom. Applejack and limestone pie. Trixie and starlight glimmer.
I look forward to more.
8070243 Or maybe Night Light finds out about Velvet's affair and rage fucks her.