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ConfusementIsKey


I'm your sexy horse goddess of love, come down from far up above ~

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Good sir, you have created a monster here.
I like it.

An interesting start overall to this story and cant wait to see where you take this. My only little thing is would be that shouldn't the likes of the Mane 6 in this story be referred to as "animatronics" not animatic.

-Frost :pinkiesmile:

5069145 Thank you for your criticism. I will take your advice respectively and use it to progress my writing skills better, and make more successful stories in the future.

~Confusement Is Key

The end part was good Never mess with Rainbow Dash

5065924 I am a ma'am, but thank you.

5074394
Ehhh... "good ma'am" doesn't sound as good XD

Maybe you should look at this and see if you want to use any of the theories.

5086535 Trust me, I've seen them all. ALL.

This was sooooo good! Please finish it!:heart:

5204747 Yes. That, I have seen. But, the thing is, I'm sticking to this theory:
To start, All of the animatronics are the children that were murdered gruesomely by the so said "murderer" that was hypnotized by what/who we call the Golden Freddy. The Golden Freddy also is the one behind the hallucinations and the constant phrase on the posters, written on the wall, on Pirate Cove's out of order sign, and where ever else that "It's me."

All of the same things follow, all the animatronics are after the security guard on a free range mode because they believe they're the exoskeleton out of its costume, which is strictly against the rules according to the animatronics. They catch you, they force you into the suit, and it somehow yanks out your teeth and eyes, but me personally don't really think about it as a theory- but that's just me. XD The theory part of it is when Foxy tries to get into the room. I believe that his intention is unlike the others, instead of roaming freely and cramming you into Freddy Fazbear's suit, he hides in Pirate Cove. Now here's what I believe why;

Who hasn't noticed Foxy's design? He looks torn down. In fact... he looks relative to the designs of a, *ding* Exoskeleton! So, when he gets out of his hiding spot, he hurries as fast as he can down to the office. When he arrives, he just pokes through the doorway. (Unlike the rest of the animatronics.) He simply just pops in to say, "Hey. Its a bit of trouble for me being in such an easy spot in the open, could I stay here with you for a while?"
And he terrifies the security guard so much that they die of a heart attack.

I think that wraps all of the basic ones down for me. But I picked these because they are simply my favorites.

*hears AJ's hobo laughter* that is heavily racist. Something bads gonna happen just for gaving that part. *filly dies and everyone screams* what'd I tell ya. This is Faust's way of saying 'don't be racist'. *realizes he was actually right as everyone is busy sxreaming about the dead filly which he now notices* I was right... I WAS RIGHT!! HA-HA! *Does a little victory dance* *notices everyone else* what's with all the screaming?

I have stared down the vilest most evil creatures in all existence and i still get a chill when something like this happens.

So..................that's it then? This has been left to rot for nearly two years now?

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