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Wandering around the park, Pipsqueak tells his mother about the latest exciting issue of his favorite comicbook series when they come across a meditating Princess Twilight Sparkle. Geological hilarity ensues.

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The cover art is more like "Princess Twilight Meditates While High as Fuck"

Or "Princess Twilight Learns the Essence of
Clown Barf" would be a bit more suitable idea.

The Grand Unifying Theory of Tom

Love it.

Nicely done

5026777 Thank you kindly. Often the best moments in life are when you just stop doing anything and just kind of enjoy the world being awesome. :pinkiesad2:

I just tried to reflect that magic here.:coolphoto:

This was quite good. I really enjoyed all of the detail. You kept just enough detail to paint a pretty picture but moved on quickly enough that I didn't lose interest in a block of details. Quite impressive. I know from experience that such a feat is difficult and mentally taxing because you have to constantly monitor it. I got the feeling of introspection and that peaceful feeling you get when you just sit back and watch a sunset or listen to the rain. Very mellow, but also deep and meaningful.

In summary, kudos to you for being awesome.

5/5 moustaches

:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

WT FUCK DID I JUST READ on the other hand you gave me an idea for a less subtle ba twilight meditation story

This was some pretty deep stuff, author... I kind of liked it. :pinkiesmile:

to all the WTF reactions, I'm sorry what did you expect? You let you mind go just to wander and it goes WEIRD places on it's own, or is that just me and most people have exceptionally boring minds?

You know, it takes some seriously intense focus to get to the point where meditation works the way people think it does... You kinda got that down pat, and I hereby say... Damn man, that was deeper than appearances would have you believe at first. :eeyup:

Are you trying to insinuate that Tom is what is left of Anghammarad? I can see it... This is marvellous by the way, deep and highly mysterious, like a long drop privy.:twilightsmile:

5105001 Don't ask him about sabertooth tigers, tar pits, big green things with teeth, or the goddess Czol.

[quote}like a long drop privy.Hopefully there isn't a pig at the end of that privy...

They had walked around the bend, and there, in a quiet corner of the park, was Princess Twilight Sparkle — real-life hero, emeritus scholar — was vacantly gazing upon a rock.

That "was" should only be on one side of the dashed interruption to the sentence, not both. The way it is, it says "there was Princess Twilight Sparkle was vacantly gazing upon a rock"

You could see that shimmering glow receding; drawn in, but not extinguished. neatly, safely sealed.

Another error...a typo? Was that period supposed to be a comma? It could be a semicolon, or stay a period and have the next word capitalized...

I hope I'm not a pain but I noticed these and some occasionally mismatched tenses and wanted to tell you :twilightblush:

5379774 Thank you! Gonna fix this right away!

Have a fave for being so out there.:twilightsmile:

5381100
Ah, well, glad I could help! :twilightsmile:

I wouldn't call this quite so much comedy.. but it certainly hit a high target.

I think the one who loved tom, was either rarity, or maude. not too long ago. snatch the tom from my hand grasshopper.

That was... Nice. Reminded me to meditate which helped me to become more... centered. Thank you.

Very interesting. I want to meditate, but never remember to.

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