Well I was going to go to bed, but this is more important. I can't wait to see Shining and Twilight finally reunite. Gonna be some shit going down there. Plus, I don't know if you plan to include it, but seeing Twilight's parents react would be such incredible schadenfreude. "Hey sorry we refused to tell you anything about your possibly-dead brother, kept you as close to lockdown as possible, and treated you like a rabid dog we didn't have the heart to put down for what turned out to be no reason."
I'm surprised I managed to read as much of this chapter as I did. Like the previous Shimmer scene, I was thoroughly unaroused by this rape. I don't know what you plan to do with this in the long term, but I hope it ends in a happy Princess, Twilight and Sunset as well as an unhappy Shimmer who leaves and never comes back.
Is this some kinda of joke? I had nothing to do at all the last few days, but now when my best friend is staying over for the week all the excellent stories with >10.000 words per chapter update all at the same time?
Woo, man, it was tough getting through the last half of this chapter. Made me feel a bit ill. Still, I have to admit, it was well done from a narrative perspective and really got into the characters' heads in a... unique way. The idea that Sunset (and Shimmer) have such a strong need for what they perceive as justice that they can't move on from guilt unless they are punished (and disproportionately to the crime, it seems like) is an interesting idea. There are certainly some people who have this issue, even if it's kinda messed up, and it sometimes takes a good deal of therapy to work through that.
>Best friend leaves >First thing Im doing afterwards is reading the new chapter >Choking the chicken because this was the most sexy thing I've ever read (don't judge me) >Best friend comes back because his car battery died right as I was about to finish and has to wait half an hour for repair guy to come >Gets a call right after he told me about that,, the repair guy is there in five minutes already instead so we don't get to hang out after all >Leaves again as fast as he returned and probably won't visit for some weeks >Now the mood is gone
Btw let me mention again how much I love this series. I have to repeat that over and over again to make up for the thousands of likes you deserve but do not have for whatever reason. Seriously, this has got to be the highest ratio of awesomeness to appreciated...ness?... I have ever seen.
5588663 The series begins with a death sentence FlashLight ship, and several small stories end up getting put into fewer groups than one big one. I wasn't exactly setting myself up for success here.
Well, I'll just add my praise as well. I love this story and look forward to future chapters. I'm not sure why Flashlight isn't liked, I find it to be very pleasant. In fact I find your Narrative and plot so enticing that it has greatly influenced and improved my own writing. Keep up the good work and take care!
Oops. I hadn't even realized that this updated. Time to catch up.
Also holy shit. Everything about this chapter was magnificent (at least right up to the end, since guys (and furious threesomes) aren't really to my taste (damn it they were SO close to tribbing)).
Well I was going to go to bed, but this is more important. I can't wait to see Shining and Twilight finally reunite. Gonna be some shit going down there. Plus, I don't know if you plan to include it, but seeing Twilight's parents react would be such incredible schadenfreude. "Hey sorry we refused to tell you anything about your possibly-dead brother, kept you as close to lockdown as possible, and treated you like a rabid dog we didn't have the heart to put down for what turned out to be no reason."
I'm surprised I managed to read as much of this chapter as I did. Like the previous Shimmer scene, I was thoroughly unaroused by this rape.
I don't know what you plan to do with this in the long term, but I hope it ends in a happy Princess, Twilight and Sunset as well as an unhappy Shimmer who leaves and never comes back.
Was... was I just turned on by rape?
Bueno.
Is this some kinda of joke? I had nothing to do at all the last few days, but now when my best friend is staying over for the week all the excellent stories with >10.000 words per chapter update all at the same time?
I have the weirdest boner right now....
We demand more!!!!!
Woo, man, it was tough getting through the last half of this chapter. Made me feel a bit ill. Still, I have to admit, it was well done from a narrative perspective and really got into the characters' heads in a... unique way. The idea that Sunset (and Shimmer) have such a strong need for what they perceive as justice that they can't move on from guilt unless they are punished (and disproportionately to the crime, it seems like) is an interesting idea. There are certainly some people who have this issue, even if it's kinda messed up, and it sometimes takes a good deal of therapy to work through that.
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>Best friend leaves
>First thing Im doing afterwards is reading the new chapter
>Choking the chicken because this was the most sexy thing I've ever read (don't judge me)
>Best friend comes back because his car battery died right as I was about to finish and has to wait half an hour for repair guy to come
>Gets a call right after he told me about that,, the repair guy is there in five minutes already instead so we don't get to hang out after all
>Leaves again as fast as he returned and probably won't visit for some weeks
>Now the mood is gone
Talk about an anticlimax. :/
Btw let me mention again how much I love this series. I have to repeat that over and over again to make up for the thousands of likes you deserve but do not have for whatever reason. Seriously, this has got to be the highest ratio of awesomeness to appreciated...ness?... I have ever seen.
5588663 The series begins with a death sentence FlashLight ship, and several small stories end up getting put into fewer groups than one big one. I wasn't exactly setting myself up for success here.
But thank you.
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Well, I'll just add my praise as well. I love this story and look forward to future chapters. I'm not sure why Flashlight isn't liked, I find it to be very pleasant. In fact I find your Narrative and plot so enticing that it has greatly influenced and improved my own writing. Keep up the good work and take care!
Oops. I hadn't even realized that this updated. Time to catch up.
Also holy shit. Everything about this chapter was magnificent (at least right up to the end, since guys (and furious threesomes) aren't really to my taste (damn it they were SO close to tribbing)).