5246257 Unfortunately, knowing Shimmer(as in HUMAN Sunset) she'll probably find a way to screw the Sparkles over somehow. We already know she's keeping the truth from Shining until she can use it for maximum drama.
Let's see now, we have: one Applejack being snarky (don't be like that to Realight, you treated Sunset the same way)
One surprise neighbor (wow Sunset, must have taken some hard work to get that place by yourself!)
One Realight killing the hell out of Sunset through imagination (It's always the quite ones....)
One pitiful Sunset (Extremely Pitiful, FIRE THE HUGS CANNON)
One
"If it helps," she added, "after I broke the mirror portal, Twilight's friends beat the crap out of me." "I thought they used the magic of friendship." "They did that too. But only after I had two black eyes."
HAHAHAHHAHAH(Sorry that was very rude if me)
One Make-up Session (sort off, at least they'll get along somewhat better?)
One Make-Out Session (If you play with your clone, is it still masturbation or sex?)
Despite thoroughly enjoying all the stories in this verse so far and following you, I somehow managed to not know a continuation was released until now. Well, that problem is rectified.
. She took a step forward, put her hand into mine, and then spoke.
"I didn't."
This. This part, and beyond is where this story went from good to awesome. The came here hoping for a descent FlashLight sexscene and found something faaaar more epic. But the sex is good to.
I blinked awake. I had one hand on Sunset's throat..
Okay, that's some damned fine writing. The whole imagined violence, imagined violence, suddenly real violence really added a lot to that scene. Would have been a lot more mundane without it.
This would work so much better for twilight if Shimmer would just tell Twilighs parents what she did.
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Next chapter: Flash develops a voyeurism fetish.
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Unfortunately, knowing Shimmer(as in HUMAN Sunset) she'll probably find a way to screw the Sparkles over somehow. We already know she's keeping the truth from Shining until she can use it for maximum drama.
Does this mean Twilight self-cest?
Woohoo! Finally caught up!
Let's see now, we have: one Applejack being snarky (don't be like that to Realight, you treated Sunset the same way)
One surprise neighbor (wow Sunset, must have taken some hard work to get that place by yourself!)
One Realight killing the hell out of Sunset through imagination (It's always the quite ones....)
One pitiful Sunset (Extremely Pitiful, FIRE THE HUGS CANNON)
One
HAHAHAHHAHAH(Sorry that was very rude if me)
One Make-up Session (sort off, at least they'll get along somewhat better?)
One Make-Out Session (If you play with your clone, is it still masturbation or sex?)
One race to the room (Flash You Lucky Bastard)
Despite thoroughly enjoying all the stories in this verse so far and following you, I somehow managed to not know a continuation was released until now. Well, that problem is rectified.
. She took a step forward, put her hand into mine, and then spoke.
"I didn't."
This. This part, and beyond is where this story went from good to awesome. The came here hoping for a descent FlashLight sexscene and found something faaaar more epic. But the sex is good to.
Okay, that's some damned fine writing. The whole imagined violence, imagined violence, suddenly real violence really added a lot to that scene. Would have been a lot more mundane without it.