I'm sorry, I know she's the hotheaded one, but Rainbow has little ground to stand on for blaming Sunset's condition on Twilight. This whole series of events, from Princess being trapped in this world, to Twilight being desperate enough for some kind of companionship to sleep with Flash, to poisoning herself are all pretty much the result of Sunset's own actions(especially the last one), all because she had to take out her resentment of Princess on Twilight in a way the pretty much ruined her, and her brother's, lives.
I'm not saying I want Sunset to die here(maybe Shimmer though, because...holy crap what a bitch), but Rainbow blaming Twilight here is just plain wrong.
After reading all this...I know what I want to see. I want to see Twilight get the life that she was denied due to a twist of fate. I want to see Princess and Sunset return to Equestria. I want Shining Armor to learn the truth, and maybe get a little bit less fucked up in the head (I'd love to see him and Cadance get back together, but that's just wishful thinking at this point). I want to see a massive Break The Haughty moment for Shimmer (whom you are really good at making us hate).
Aside from all that, you're quite the wonderful writer, and while I'm not usually into fics of this nature (the sheer soul-crushing darkness, not the clop), this has been quite enthralling.
Wow poor Realight, things have gotten really messed up for her, aye?
And there is nothing more embarrassing then a parent catching you in the act of 'personal time', unless you're a teenage dude who gets caught watching MLP:FiM by them. Or in front of your class.
You know what happens if Sunset were to die? She'd be put out of her misery whereas Twilight will have to live with the consequences of Sunset's machinations for the entirety of her life. So I think that Sunset poisoning herself is both cowardly, and a desperate attempt to bring sympathy to her cause. If Sunset really wanted to make up for her previous wrongdoings, then she should let Twilight hate her, know that this would never change, and swallow the fact that this will rightfully haunt her forever.
I know that sounds harsh, but it just really bothers me when someone claims to be sorry yet refuses to accept punishment for their actions. This story just really touches the side of me that believes in vengeance. It's a good story though! I find it very entertaining.
Pretty good chapter.
I'm sorry, I know she's the hotheaded one, but Rainbow has little ground to stand on for blaming Sunset's condition on Twilight. This whole series of events, from Princess being trapped in this world, to Twilight being desperate enough for some kind of companionship to sleep with Flash, to poisoning herself are all pretty much the result of Sunset's own actions(especially the last one), all because she had to take out her resentment of Princess on Twilight in a way the pretty much ruined her, and her brother's, lives.
I'm not saying I want Sunset to die here(maybe Shimmer though, because...holy crap what a bitch), but Rainbow blaming Twilight here is just plain wrong.
After reading all this...I know what I want to see. I want to see Twilight get the life that she was denied due to a twist of fate. I want to see Princess and Sunset return to Equestria. I want Shining Armor to learn the truth, and maybe get a little bit less fucked up in the head (I'd love to see him and Cadance get back together, but that's just wishful thinking at this point). I want to see a massive Break The Haughty moment for Shimmer (whom you are really good at making us hate).
Aside from all that, you're quite the wonderful writer, and while I'm not usually into fics of this nature (the sheer soul-crushing darkness, not the clop), this has been quite enthralling.
it continues! I'm so stoked!
KYAAAA!!!!.....That is all
I liedLove it and can't wait for the next chapter and is it wierd that I like Shimmer
5185587 She doesn't know the full story. She doesn't know any better.
Wow poor Realight, things have gotten really messed up for her, aye?
And there is nothing more embarrassing then a parent catching you in the act of 'personal time', unless you're a teenage dude who gets caught watching MLP:FiM by them. Or in front of your class.
You know what happens if Sunset were to die? She'd be put out of her misery whereas Twilight will have to live with the consequences of Sunset's machinations for the entirety of her life. So I think that Sunset poisoning herself is both cowardly, and a desperate attempt to bring sympathy to her cause. If Sunset really wanted to make up for her previous wrongdoings, then she should let Twilight hate her, know that this would never change, and swallow the fact that this will rightfully haunt her forever.
I know that sounds harsh, but it just really bothers me when someone claims to be sorry yet refuses to accept punishment for their actions. This story just really touches the side of me that believes in vengeance.
It's a good story though! I find it very entertaining.
Rereading this to refresh on the story. Wow. You are a master at first person.