I woke up that morning expecting it to be a normal day. Eat breakfast, go to town, hang out with friends. I definitely didn't expect to get hit by a truck and wake up to find myself in a world full of talking ponies. And to top it all off, I'm missing an arm, or is that a foreleg?
This is my first ever attempt to write a work of fiction without it being a school assignment. I hope you guys like it. I have to give acknowledgement to my friends who helped me to write this. Meg, Chris, Marco, Para, Mag, JBF, Conduit, and Shado, thanks for helping me out with the fic. I owe you guys big time. Without you guys and our convos in the REwiki chat, I probably wouldn't have been able to think of half the things I thought of for the fic. So thank you.
I had talk with my original co-author about it, and I've decided to keep my original story alive. Therefore, I'm working
with Chris, aka AppleBucker22, who will be editing on the orignal story only, and the rewrite is going up as a separate fic entirely.
I love the way the description doesn't even say what the story's about. It sure makes me want to start reading it!
468863 Is it a crossover?
468874 I dunno. I'm not touching it.
I actually called it Fullmetal Pony cause the main character gets a metal prosthetic replacement for his lost arm, which is technically now a leg, like in fullmetal alchemist. I'm still thinking of how to progress with the story from where I've left off.
468907 I'm up to episode 45 of fullmetal alchemist, i only started watching it a few days ago. Epic anime.
468943
yeah. I really like it. Watched every episode of both the original anime and Brotherhood
468955 It's probably the 3rd best anime ive ever seen. 1st being death note, and 2nd Elfen lied.
468958
I saw a couple of manga books for death note, but I only saw the first episode of Elfen lied
468960 WHAT! you need to watch death note. Also, dont watch elfen lied, by the time you get to the last episode it gets incredibly messed up...
I wrote a story with a very smiliar title but I deleted it because after 4 hours of it being released, the thought couldn't escape my head "That was probably the worst thing I've ever written"
Nice into.
Fullmetal Alchemist: Brotherhood made me a watcher of anime, so I can't wait to read this!
468943
Wait until the end it's cool, then you have to watch the movie. (has seen both the movie and show 3 times each. FMA(ORIGINAL was my fav anime, DN my 2, and still looking for a num 3 that is worthy.)
Oh and as for the story, this has something to do with metal limbs that were inspired by FMA. I read now!
469301 A very good anime you should watch is 'Kaze No Stigma'
Oh, My, Cylestia. I need more! So epic!
Please tell me that you are making more!
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Don't worry, I've still got a few ideas left for this story to go, including a plot twist that will really knock you for a loop. What I will say about them is that they stem from who two specific ponies remind me of.
Yay!
Can't wait! I loved the Fullmetal Alchemist series, This (kind of) molds the two together in an awesome way. Also, I didn't know that ponies could get guns, I understand the whole sword thing, I honestly thought that they were still kind of in a Middle Ages ara, Oh well, makes it all the more awesome!
not really well written add a bit more character depth, and more detail and i can promise you it will be awesome.
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I gave riley a pair of pistols cause the guy I based him on, a friend from the REwiki, was a bit of a gun enthusiast.
473363
I'll work on it. I'm not much of a writer, to be honest I hated english class. I never got the hang of poetry and stuff like that because I could only take what was written literally. I couldn't see the deeper meaning behind the words
Nice work on the story so far.
475135
thanks, to be honest I don't think I'm much of a writer.
475140
I can tell you can write. Well more then me. Would you add somepony that a fan of your work wish to be added to the story?
475148
Sure, that's who most of my allies and the shadows are based on. They're friends of mine from the Resident Evil Wiki. I asked them if they wanted to be in the fic, so they told me what species they wanted to be, what weapon they wanted to have, what they wanted their names to be, and what kind of personality they wanted. If you want, I could write you into it too.
475185
Yes plz.
pony: earth.
weapon: A magic book about fire shouts .
personality: shy.
Name: Luke.
Looks: Red tail and Yellow and red Hare. Green body. Cute mark A Lighter.
and ty if this pony is added.
475246
Ok, I'll work on it. If I do add you to it, you'll become a permanent part of the story, so if I decide to make a sequel, you'll be in it
475301
i'am guessing that THINGS WILL BE EPIC very soon
Well, the next chapter will have a bit of a shocker for you. I will say this much. Meadhbh isn't everything she appears to be.
473363
I was gonna say the same thing. With some edits, this could be awesome.
484113
Well, I could probably use some help in that regard. I'm not really good at giving depth to anything. I'm actually surprised that I could write a work of fiction at all, with my difficulty seeing the deeper meaning behind things. It's probably the reason I was so bad in English class, especially poetry
how can you actually favorite my story yours is better
530551
I like your story, that's why I favourited it. It's cool. Wish I could say more, but I'm never able to accurately express why I like what I like
530570 fair nuff brony fair nuff
Can't wait!!!!!! For the next Chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!
533808
I know, but remember I still have to write it. But I will say this, we may gain a member, but we lose one as well. You can probably guess who...
I'M MOTHERFUDGING SLAGAR THE CRUEL!
LORD OF CAPS LOCKS!
SORROW OF WATERSHIP DOWN!
KING OF TOURS!
EATER OF FRIED ICECREAM AND ARCH DUKE OF SOME KNOWN COUNTRY IN AFRICA!
AND I CLAIM....
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EPIC first post
546750
thanks that felt pretty epic lol
I bet the next Chapters will be EPIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
547096
Trust me, it will be, especially since you'll be making your grand entrance
547102 ty
547105
Alright, the chapter is almost done, I just need to add a few finishing touches and then you're in the fic! I hope I did ok on it.
Epic way for me to get in.
550666
Thanks. I just wrote it that way the second I thought of it
weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee stuff also nice now what to do I now work on my new story spite
568004
cool, I'll be sure to check it out!
568018 not out yet I plan on no romance and my character will avoid it (past troubles with girlfreinds and such) he is completely spite full and filled to the brim with the darker emotions of the world also the rest of the time when its not a dark a emotion it will probably be emotionless. So yeah hes like me but a little bit more dark (barely)
Just out of curiousity, is he gonna pass out at the end of every chapter?
848267 Not necessarily. I just have a thing about making him pass out. I think. Or else it's just a coincidence. I can't remember anymore
476536 How do you pronounce Meadhbh?