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Viking Hoof


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REBEL!!!

And awwww, I was hoping there was more.

4994078 Nouns ending with 'a' are feminine, and adding 'ito' or 'ita' to the end is like adding 'little' to the front of the word in English.

Basically, there was a comment asking the gender of the author that was given a non-answer. I don't know if the author is a senor or a senorita.

Also, burro means donkey, so a burrito is a little donkey.:scootangel:

5002354

Why does Twilight exclaim that? Is she angry?

No, she is annoyed. Less than anger but still 'exclaim' worthy.:moustache:

5002992

Also, burro means donkey, so a burrito is a little donkey.:scootangel:

... SCOOTALOO IS NOT A DONKEY!!!:trollestia:

You should fix the italics some time.
But interesting story.

5004155 fixed italics.
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5002354 the second two from the way she's built ((which discord did to prevent him from trying to run away)) hmm... will need to elaborate on the first.
5002211 *cwies*

5003280 Hmm, I distincty remember writing her giving her proposition back when they were at the dinning table.

If you wish to volunteer to be an editor, I can just Gdoc this shit up and give you a link.

OR, you could become our much needed third author, who ensures that we format things, use grammar, and are sexy, but who does it with the overall story in mind.

5004681 I think you replied to the wrong person.

>> Vates Despero Hmm, I distinctly remember writing her giving her proposition back when they were at the dinning table.

The only thing I said in that particular comment was answering a different point from the guy who raised the proposition timing thing.


Oh, and;

>> Mozzarella the second two from the way she's built ((which discord did to prevent him from trying to run away)) hmm... will need to elaborate on the first.

The first is really not much of a mystery. 'She' managed to discover his in game name and when he was online, got his cell number, and managed to get into his house without alerting the neighbors. He also observed she was dressed 'nerdy' prior to that so her being smart is a logical assumption.

5004907 but, I should probably elaborate that line of thinking int he story.

5002354

I-I'm not cute?! *heart shatters* *runs away in tears*

I... am very confused and intrigued. But the whole Discord/Fluttershy hint, yeah I can't help but find that creepy. I don't like discord....

This Discord... this stunt is just as bad as anything he did pre-reformation. Given that this is after the Tirek betrayal, his parole is soooo fucking violated right now. He should already be on his way back to the garden. This is already looking like it is going to fall into the same death pit as surprise you're engaged.

5007118 hmm... I've actually been considering a chapter for that story.

Lol yes, looking foward to this.

5006850 eh, I'm on the fence about him, I love him as an actor, but as a character, creep factor. Unfortunately, he's the only one who would do the sort of things necessary to set the story up the way me and my co-writer have envisioned.
5007227 huzzah!

5007118 I just imagine this as Discord's way of playing cupid.

Needs a side-chapter with Discord and Fluttershy later on...

5007760 *hands you baton of side chapter writing* get to it.

I can picture Molestia telling Twilight just how proud she is of her.:trollestia:

SEX SCENE AHEAD, READ AT YOUR OWN RISK

Boy, that was subtle

5009137 if it was subtle, then all the morons would have skipped right past it and been disgusted when they saw horse sex with a futa and male. It was for their own delicate temperaments that I was so loud.

I am enjoying it. Please continue:twilightblush:

Wouldn't the act of misrepresentation render the contract null and void? Id take Discord to Magic Court and sue him for his soul... or something.

Wouldn't the act of misrepresentation render the contract null and void? I'd take him to Magic Court and sue him for his soul... or something.


5006971 5012506 unfortunately, the god of chaos and discord is above contract law, he snapped his fingers and made it valid.

he could of course just bound the contract to him, and made it so that it would only end if he did what was in it, wouldn't even need a signature. On the other hand, the god of Discord probably likes doing "three wishes" where they all mess up, and thus the contract that only requires one signature would of course be along the lines of "be careful what you wish for"


5007760 It's going to come, and absolutely nothing sexy will happen because I will do whatever it takes to keep Discord out of Fluttershy's nonexistent pants, including making him gay if I have to, Because I agree with this guy>>5006850

5008970 Yes, I can too, it's quite entertaining.

5009137 I know right? I was thinking of having Viking do it in bold too but I figured it was hard enough to notice as it was.

5010411 That... is a lot of emotions to feel over about 800 words of porn.

5012506 If we did that there wouldn't be much of a story.

Stop with the false chapters, it gets my hopes up. :c

5035739 I'm sowwy, but I rely on Kama half the time, which means it's not done till he's on

Eldorado
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Please don't post chapters just as update warnings or other non-story content. All chapters must contain story content - if you want to share news or other non-story material, please do so in a tagged blog entry.

5037351 okay. I'm sorry if I made a mistake. I'm kinda sick right now.

Eldorado
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5037364 Understandable. But chapters to "hold comments" or the most recent one which announces itself as an update-only type of deal aren't allowed, so just keep that in mind in the future. When you go to post a blog entry, there are options at the bottom to tag a story - anyone who's favorited this story will get that blog in their feed, even if they aren't following you. Same effect as a chapter, but with less clutter and it doesn't artificially bump the story like if you actually wrote a new chapter.

5037472 The comment holding chapter will have images and extra info not found in story. It's not just a comment holding chapter.

5037472 *trots off to cry* w-where will I put my relevant images now? *speeds up to a run before disappearing over the next hill*

Hmm, I can see awkward situations in the future!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

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