Hmm, I can see awkward situations in the future!

Incredibly off, but oh so interesting.

~Crystalline Electrostatic~

Sounds like an extremely quirky/kinky/ultimately sweet love story, but...

futa on male

*shudder*
I can handle it. I know I can.

5042783 There is no need to force yourself.

5042788 Nah, I've read and seen a lot worse. I'd hate to not even give the story a chance.

If I throw money at my screen, will you write more of this?

I was hoping to see the conversation Twilight after she used his limp body as a sock. Guess I'll have to wait for next chapter.

5043090 *strokes chin* you could throw games at my steam account.

5043160

How does that make you more prductive?

5043215 MAGIC!

I wasn't finished editing! I never got to the parts you wrote last night!

5043404 sowwy... if you finish editing tonight then I will republish the chapter with the edits.

If you need to do updates, dood. Why not try blog posts?

5043917 not even half of the people who read the story ever check out the blog posts...

5043941 Oh... the only other thing is to mention that you updated stuff in previous chapters in the author's notes of the latest chapter, dood.

Not much else you can do other than sending a PM to every single person that Favorited this, dood.

5043970 hmmmm... that sounds like a job for my editors.

I am disappointed, the element of LOYALTY, of all people? cmon. Seriously. Also, I couldn't bring myself to read the song, it was that bad.

5046022 warned you.

5046256 It wasn't the song that bothered me, it was Rainbow's OOC behavior, she is element of loyalty. literally anyone else sneaking in would have made more sense.

I skipped most of this chapter. I just read the part with the CMC (really Cheerilee?) and the part of Alex waking up. I might try to make sense of it all next chapter.

5046300 I'm not a very private person. I suspect Kama isn't. I certainly don't think Rainbow Dash is. Neither we, nor we suspect she (unless it was taught as a sister code) think what she did was really wrong based on how we plan to write Equestria.

5046433 why?

5046661 I didn't really want to read a song about a gossip finding out that Twilight was 'getting busy'. Plus, I got pissed out when Discord decided to broadcast.

5048832 don'na fash yerself laddy/lass, me and my partner have a-boot 1/4 daen of th' next wan!

hmm... something not right, in the prologue, it was said that Rainbow Dash was in Cloudsdale renewing her flight license, and in this chapter, that happens practically at the same time, she is already in Ponyville.