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TimeRarity64


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"Sooner or later I'll fade away...and be happy." -Discord

Behind a Chaotic God-like being is a world where the whiteness remains as the only colour beyond his serene. Now in that world where the holes begin to form, that chaotic being is slowly witnessing one thing most would not expect.

My Little Pony is own by Hasbro and DHX Studios. I write for fun and a free profit out of it on creative writing purposes. Thank you all and stay safe out there darling.

Btw: Forgot to mention it, but the source would lead you to a special comment of Entropy and Discord, a lovely inspiration that had me thinking a lot. My bad, anyway, do enjoy.

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Did the apocalypse happen? Or is Discord simply crazy? Good story, but I found it hard to follow; can you write a sequel with someone sane like Fluttershy talking about Discords situation?

Please include the source for the image, or credit the artist; it was an awesome image, and I see you took from it the concept of entropy vs Discord just as I did, but you need to give the artist credit.

Entropy and chaos are not the same thing, but they are related. I could see Discord embracing his own dissolution into disorder at the end of his existence, taking pleasure in turning into pure chaos even as it disintegrates him; seems like a happier way to go than to be full of pain and fear at the end. I'm not sure if that's what this is about, but the fact that he can't seem to finish any of his memories seems to indicate that his identity and self are dissolving, and he has regrets for what didn't happen in his life but he's not afraid of what's happening now.

4948063 I could have sworn I put the credits there, and the source. I'll edit it now. I remember seeing that concept and simply was astonished that it made sense, sorry, deary. Momma rushed too fast and missed her steps. Forgive? :heart:
4947779 And maybe.

BTW, thank you ever so much for posting a link to a NIN song I'd never heard before, now I can't stop listening to it. :-) (But seriously I can see why; the song is perfect for the mood you were trying to create.)

4954436 The title of the story is inspired from Nine inch Nails-And All That Could Have Been. Thank you darling.

I don't get it.

4963733 As with most who've never studied physics, I doubt the author actually comprehends entropy, which is merely a measure of the unavailable energy in a closed thermodynamic system.

A universe in which entropy is the prevailing factor in determinism winds down into a Big Chill. However, this is not the same as turning into 'chaos'. Indeed, the final phase of such a universe is a highly uniform state of near-zero energy density.

Given that Discord and others have travelled between dimensions, Equestria isn't a closed system.

Also... SECRETS OF THE PUNIVERSE: "Crawling In My Skin" was actually inspired by a severe scabies mite infection. Which is why the wounds won't heal. :trollestia:

What even is that cover art? I love it, and I get how it fits the story... but... what even is that

source link pls

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