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TimeRarity64


I prefer writing and reading original stuff, with a sinful taste to abnormality, darling. :raritywink:

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(My Little Pony is copyrighted to Hasbro Inc. All characters are owned by them too. This is a work of fiction and it is free. I do not gain any money from it whatsoever. Thank you and enjoy.)

Before his departure from his lover, Rarity; a fully grown dragon, Spike, thanks her for making him the happiest dragon in the world.

The Story is a Sad to Heart-Warming style with some poetic sentences I managed to type out. If you spot out a sentence that repeats from another sentence in another paragraph, it was purposely put there for emphasis. Enjoy the story and stay safe out there.

P.S. I was given permission by zeeclaw (Owner of the cover) to use it. Credit goes to him for beautiful artwork and providing me the inspiration.

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Comments ( 13 )

You really need to make a sequel to this and make a Rarity note back to spike.

Thank you for this amazing story!:pinkiehappy:

3736654 The story was originally planned out to being a sequel to Your Book of Love. But I changed my mind and make it so that it was different from it. What you read so far was the original version of Your Book Of Love but written in a different way with a picture that was planned out for it.:twilightsmile:

Awwww! But, also, awwhh! The first was a cute aw! The second was an annoyed awh because he had to leave Rarity. I loved this story! I have put this into my group Romance is Magic!

3743623 Thank you very much. This goes with the other comment of yours you put on the other story. Thank you again very much.:twilightsmile:

' And I know the same for me wouldn’t too' that line... its just jarring, I can't make sense of it and really disrupts the flow. Apart from that... a great emotional piece, short, but you get a strong connection nonetheless, and lengthening it would weaken it.

Dear Spike,
I don't know how to say this but I've had twins, Before you have any doubts (Yes I've had bad luck with dating others before we were wed)
The babys both have purple manes, blue eyes, White scales , green ridged spines & breath fire, The hospital bill includes damages,
Twilight is so proud of you. :twilightsheepish:Come home soon, Love Rarity Belle the Dragon.

The doctor held up the Babe by the feet and gave it a slap, Little to the doctors credit the fire ball engulfed the better half of the D R, The hospital staff have yet to see the
rest of the wing as the debris covered most the exits. Luckly no major injuries.
& your wifey looks like a toasted marshmellow.:duck:

4721446 Keep going, you might have made this comment box a story ground. :rainbowlaugh:

Rarity worked harded than her old sewing machine with twin #2, Should of seen them run ! the 1st one was bad enough. . . .:raritydespair:
Junor miss just came out with a squeek, & a puff ring of pink smoke "It's a girl ! the nurse said,:raritywink:
Poor Doc was still handling babe #1 What a mess:raritycry:.

(Hell of a way to colab a story):flutterrage:

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