• Member Since 23rd Jun, 2014
  • offline last seen Apr 17th, 2023

Pot8osoup


Comments ( 32 )

What the buck did I just read?

That almost hurt.

This was Amazing. :pinkiehappy:

Oh yeah, crunch those numbers baby! Crunch them I say!

I have no idea what to feel right now...

XD the cover picture

I DUNNO IF I SHOULD ADD THIS TO THE WTF FOLDER OF OVERLY STUPID FANFICTION, BUT IM UPVOTING THIS

Well... Whatever that was... Thumbs up!

4963399 Already been added, mate. I think it deserved to end up in it.

Noticed 2 typos:

Should she sneak put the back?

and

Fluttershy was still whimpering after being raped, but helped push the calculator into Twilight. r head as ejaculate sprayed out of her pussy.

(Or perhaps you don't care, seeing you were drunk at the time...)

Also, I'm going to be a jerk and gonna give this story an upvote (although I have to admit, the dark tag scared me at first).

The buck......
Who cares I'm upvoting it!:trollestia:

4963808 Yeah, I guess my friend didn't pick up on those mistakes. The dark tag was there cause... Well, I guess it kinda can be considered dark. Can't it? Anyway, thanks for the upvote!

Hilarious and weird:pinkiesmile:

:unsuresweetie: Are you trying to blackmail upvotes for a drunken trollfic in your author's notes?

4966011 Huh? Of course not! What gave you that idea? Or... Are you joking?

I know the cover art is a reflection of the story, but it would've been tiny if it was a picture of Twilight giving a calculator a sexy stare.

Rainbow Dash was having a threesome with Soarin' and Spitfire.

:rainbowlaugh: NAILED IT!!!!

4966476
What the writer's note says. If lots of people hate it, I'll make another. Maybe you were still a little tipsy, or maybe just a typo... Just read it again and that's what it says. So if people like it you won't make another one, but if they don't you will.

4971023 Wait... Oh right. Dammit! I am going to KILL my friend! But hopefully people will read the comments and realise that I didn't mean to. I know, you probably thought I wrote the authors notes, but I only wrote some of it. A stupid bastard wrote the rest. I should have written that. Ah well, I'm to lazy to change it.

Well then...

4973092

Ah I see, well that sucks for your friend. I think people will glance over it, but I am an English major and I have been trained to see stuff like that in assignments.

Uh, Twilight is being put to death for LYING?! What the buck?! Every noble lies!!
...
and why would somepony of her magical skills even have a gun?!
...
Excuse me now. I must go bleach my brain.
...
and she should have used a slide rule!!

Haven't read this yet but I know this will be funny:rainbowlaugh:

I got roped into writing a sequel, already halfway done. Please don't kill me.

Wait, so we like it to hate it, and we dislike it to love it? ...I'll just dislike it because you told me to.

I ask myself one question every day. You wanna know what that question is? Why do I keep reading this crap.:pinkiesick:

There’s plenty wrong with this story, but to come off as disjointed even for a trollfic… yeah. Thoroughly uninspired, unimpressive, and ultimately unlikeable, which is a damn shame since the whole Twilight × calculator schtick done right would’ve been comedy gold.

5287114 Eh, I was drunk. To be honest I don't really care that everyone hates it, because I didn't even want this to be published.

Login or register to comment