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EquestrianDovahkin
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acutally all things ocnsidered alucard owuld probably be easily disposed of in equistria. celestia's magic is probably as fatal to him as a holy cross, only except we are talking about raw sun and holy magic rather than a symbol.
All I can say is: the description alone: LOL!!!
3763197 im planning of him meeting her but dont worry if you know Alucard you know he knows the sensation sweeping the nation...
3763199 thank you, I very pleased too see description full filled his purpose...
HA !
Grammar... so awful. *shivers and sheds a tear for grammar not used*
3763197 Keep in mind that Alucard isn't really affected by sunlight.
... I want to read this, but It doesn't feel like Hellsing Abridged. it feels more like those regular shows that try and spew jokes and comedic relief as much as possible when they obviously fail at it. also there are soo many little mannerisms that are off about this.
maybe I'm a little bit nitpicky but really you could've done better.
3764628 yeah, I know I got the idea in the middle and wrote it in the middle of the night.
But I'll edit it today or tomorrow.
3764810 I'm planning of editing lots of things for this...
And yes I do realize this and am working on fixing
LOL!!!
Heheheheheehehehehe
3764862 http://www.youtube.com/watch/?v=cD8EPdn5Ctg
3785744 I'll take it as a compliment?
3785992 hold on i have yet to read your fic ,will reply in ten min, just thought you might like that music had to find it
3785999 well thank you good sir I did enjoy it.
3786008 well ive just finished your fic ,was good ,going to fav, you know where thats from right?
3786026 judging from the cover art I'd say the social network but I swear I've heard it being used in a multitude of films.
3786035 http://youtu.be/R4wY-FhBArw?t=13m31s
3786040 sadly I cannot view this link due to the fact that I am currently on mobile but I will at my earliest convenience.
3786084 considering its very relevant to your fic you should.
3786087 oh believe me, I will.
Umm what?
I fell like were missing some context here. Chapter 1-2 were funny as f@€ k but chapter 3? Defenitly missing context.
This has potential... so long as you completely rewrite what you have to actually add some form of context... and not have it so absurdly fast-paced/short.
This seemed like a fun ride at first but it turned downhill awfully quick.
Hmmmmm....Needs work. More descriptions about....well...everything that's going on. But you got some good funny parts.
3763474 i can completely and vividly imagine him doing all of this...
I'm not even gonna read this. I don't think I could do it without waking up the whole house. I just wanted to say YES!!!!!!! Also...told ya it was Nazis
Okay, a few things:
1) Spacing needs work.
2) Grammar and spelling needs work, too.
3) Want an editor?
4570088 I agree.
6449381
Have you read it yet?