Don't know what to put here. Just feel free to correct my mistakes. Thank you.
Oh my goosh...
Okay, it's still better than school, but...still...
Being a PONY ?
Wow.
Weiiiiird. As weird as circle-shaped hooves.
I'm not a bad girl, I'm actually the opposite, but...
Restart my life...and stay in a horse-fully world forever is...kinda strange.
But still cool .
Well, that's what I thought....
(Cover art by me...)
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I think you could have placed all these three chapters in one, called: "Changing, learning, turning over and over"
It's just, even I have atleast 1k words in my chapters. I would have understood if you would use a new chapter everytime she / he passes out, or goes to sleep, if only the former you could say he / she has very bad luck and gets crushed by the famous piano-stuff-fall.
But now... it does seem short and without system, with either one being okay alone, but together...
It just doesn't add up. In addition, you wrote each of these chapters at different dates, which would explain it, if it wasn't for that this story is a "New Story" AKA just published.
This seems like you certainly could have added all in one, but who am I to judge?
I only update when I do a crossover, because I don't write otherways.
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As you may have seen, I wrote the first two chapters a year ago, and I thought "I can't possibly post it so far..."
So, of course, I continued recently and posted it, when it passed the 1000 words restriction.
Anyways, Thanks you for your advices, but I'm wayyyy too lazy to rebuild the whole thing in olnly one chapter. I'd rather let them like they are, sorry.
You found it, there is NO LOGIC In what I am doing with this. I just can't organize myself.
But, again, I'm doing this for fun!
And....kind of my Oc's backstory.
Again, Solarkness, thank you for your comment, it could somehow help me with the whole process.
Thanks and goodbye.
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Lazyness? I know about that. Heck, I already said this vaguely, the only reason I updated the last two times is because my story is a Displaced story, and I was asked for a crossover.
Then again, I started it for the crossovers, so it makes a bit of sense...
Short and sweet. Me likee.
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Thank you, dear sir. ^^
Oh dear.
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Yes? What is it?