*COUGH ! COUGH!...*
Urrgh... My head... Where am I ?
I opened my eyes as I watched the lilac Alicorn in front of me.
-Are you okay, Cedix? You passed out 10 minutes ago, she said.
-For the second time I guess...
Why was my head hurting me so bad? I couldn't remember what happened when I fell...
-Can you stand up, Cedix ?
-Of course...
I started to raise my head when I discovered I was looking at a cloud. A cloud. In the sky. And I was in front of that cloud.
-WHAT THE-AAAAAAAAH!!!
Everything went super fast after I screamed.
-Cedix?? WHAT IN TARTARUS ARE YOU DOING UP THERE ?!?
As I was falling, Twilight got off the ground, flew in my direction and catched me! She catched me with her...tiny muscles! How was that possible?
-I can't hold you any..more! Aaah!!
Knew it.
I watched us falling down on ruins. Were we going to crash into those rocks? That'd be painful.
Something came into my brain while we were falling.
"How did I get up there ?"
The memories flew into my mind.
So, Cedix, you wanted to fly on your own wings, uh ?
Here you go...!
-Twilight! I got you!
I flew down and grabbed the Alicorn by the shoulders.
I did it. I flied for the first time. At least...I think I did.
-Watch out, Cedix! The tree-aaAAH!!
I heard a sparkling noise before we crashed.
*BUMP*
Urrgh....
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I woke up slowly of passing out for the third time.
I wasn't hurted. My body was fine.
-Am...Am I alive? Twilight, a-are you okay?? Twil-
-I'm here. We're fine, Cedix. I protected us.
She was right. A large ball of purple aura was surrounding us.
-Wow... Thank you, Twilight... I guess you're not a princess for nothing, uh? I giggled quietly.
-Thanks, she said as she stood up. I'm not that strong though, I couldn't protect the tree. It' ve fallen because of us.
-Oh, well, uh... I'm sorry. I didn't know how to use those...wings.
-Yes, about that, said the Alicorn, facing me. Did you ever used your wings or what?? You could have killed us!!
-I know!! I'm sorry, T-Twilight! I never knew how to use them...
Would that work...?
-Wait. You never flied before??
-No, I didn't.
-But... Did you at least passed your exam in Cloudsdale?
-Y-Yes, I did!!
-HOW?? If a pegasus isn't abled to fly, he can't possibly pass a flying exam!
-I...I uh...
-You what? Tell me how you passed it, Cedix. I need to know.
I am screwed. I'm forced to face it.
-Twilight, I never passed this exam.
-...Could have guessed that.
I sighed.
-Twilight, I come from the human world.
Her eyes went wide.
-WHAT??? YOU MEAN...
-Calm down!! Don't interrupt me. I discovered this world an hour ago, ok! I only have those wings for only an hour ago. I don't know how to fly, okay? Now, let me just leave! I've cause enough trouble, I said as I ran the fastest possible trough the forest.
-CEDIX! Wait!
-I'm gonna go find Princess...Sun and tell her to teleport me back to MY WORLD! I'M NOT A PONY!!
Tears fell on the ground.
-Wait!! You don't know were she lives!! Cedix...
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Fly by my own wings... If I don't know how to use them, how could I possibly fly ?!?
This Princess... Just got in trouble.
I think you could have placed all these three chapters in one, called: "Changing, learning, turning over and over"
It's just, even I have atleast 1k words in my chapters. I would have understood if you would use a new chapter everytime she / he passes out, or goes to sleep, if only the former you could say he / she has very bad luck and gets crushed by the famous piano-stuff-fall.
But now... it does seem short and without system, with either one being okay alone, but together...
It just doesn't add up. In addition, you wrote each of these chapters at different dates, which would explain it, if it wasn't for that this story is a "New Story" AKA just published.
This seems like you certainly could have added all in one, but who am I to judge?
I only update when I do a crossover, because I don't write otherways.