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Lady Maria
Secrets beckon to all humans but only the foolish and ignorant search for what is not meant to be discovered. Such is the fate of men.
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Manus, Father of the Abyss. All questions answered.
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Boss ahead therefore Praise the Sun!
4945830 you like?
4946760 \\[T]//
4945830 so when are you going to continue Orenstein and Smough's epic quest to discover an infinite amount of groceries? dude I LOVE IT X3
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Left and then enemy
Praise the Sun! and then Praise the Sun!
Kidding aside, there many issues wrong with this. Spelling, grammar, punctuation, syntax, but the most stand out issue was the total destruction of Ahuizotl's name. Alizoro is nowhere near close. Another one was Queen Chrysalis, all she wanted was some love, and to feed her people, who just happened to eat love. Damned to hell for trying to feed her people. That is like some Old Testament stuff right there. (By which I mean eating pork is a crime punishable by hell.) It was an interesting concept, but the execution was flawed.
4948933 yeah but she impersonated a goddess and did you see all those nobles come back? no I didn't see them come back. so she is also one of that worlds biggest villains
4948933 I just fixed all the Ahuizotl name errors
4948933 dafuq I'm christian not Jewish or Islamic for me eating pork isn't punishable by hell. Wtf dude
Interesting. He certainly is powerful enough to back up what he says. I like.
4949781 Thank you my fellow ruler of the abyss
4949781 so do you plan to write anything else? more about Void anything???
4949791 Most of my stuff is on fanfiction. You wouldn't be interested in it unless you like Yugioh. As for Oblivion, I likely won't write any more with him in Equestria. Perhaps other universes.
4949815 mmmm thats dismaying but keep in contact with me okay?
4949822 So long as I'm an Abyss Lord.
4949838 Abyssalite king to be exact Utopianking
4948953 Evil is in the eye of the beholder, and history is written by the winners. Good always triumphs over evil because the winners always paint themselves in a positive light and the losers in a negative light in the history books. In Egypt, when new Pharaohs took over and they did not like the way the old Pharaoh did things they would erase all traces of their predecessor from records. To England, during the Revolutionary War, George Washington, Paul Revere, Samuel Adams, Benjamin Franklin, and Thomas Jefferson were terrorists while Benedict Arnold was a hero. From a different point of view, Cadance and Shining Armor should be condemned to Tartarus for genocide. Because without the love from the ponies in Equestria and without their loving Queen to take care of them the entire Changeling race will surely die. How do you weigh the lives of a few nobles as greater than the lives of an entire race of people? Thinking like that is what got Marie Antoinette beheaded.
4949862 We are talking like a after the Rebrith of Oblivion story the changelings end up going extinct
4949867 Exactly, genocide. The total and complete eradication and annihilation of an entire race.
Poor little Changelings
all they wanted was love.
4949901 Well they interfered with a war suppose to be just equines and Abyssalite demons
It was their own foolishness that brought them to an grizly and painful end by rushing at a dark army with a magnitude 100,000,000,000 strong they only had 100,000,000. insert Rape here
4949901 They should have also know Oblivion has no mercy no sorrow and will not spare anything that stands in his way innocent or not
4949919 Ah. Well I did not read your other story, so you have me at a head canon disadvantage.
4950467 well why don't ya go read it ps in not done with it chapter X of XXI will start tomorrow!
4950471 I am a Grammar Dalek, what most insensitive people refer to as a "Grammar Nazi." I will sample the first chapter to see how it goes. I was drawn to this story by its name. It is the same as the name of one of my favorite writers on this site. I thought it was a meta story. And for some reason I cannot resist finding out why stories are red.
4950509 XD shush im a beginner
I'm sorry. I know you were trying to be brutal or ominous here, but you just missed the mark. I'm feeling more awkward than scared right now. And that Author's Note......dang. How "intimidating".
Needs a bit of work. Horror is a difficult subject to nail.
4950653 thanks bro
I liked because it was an interesting idea but, as 4950653 said you missed the mark a bit
THAT WAS FUCKING AWESOME
5030700 thank you! I'll write some more soon but if you like this go read my other story! The rebirth of the abyss lord oblivion! It is my crowned jewel!!!
4950509
Goodness. I saw it just now. "Grammar Dalek". May I adopt this idiom. Pretty pretty please
5438281 Sure. Go forth and CONJUGATE! CONJUGATE! CON-JU-GATE!!
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