After a misshapen spell lands Sweetie Belle and Diamond Tiara in an alternate universe. As they try to escape, they learn another story unfold that neither of them could have thought existed.
Can somepony make cover art for this?
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Hmm, well this is a good story. I can't say it's bad I really did enjoy it.
However, I feel the more can be explained and described within a lot of those sentences.
I like the idea of the alternate world they traveled into their and every pony having alternate character and personalities was also great.
I could see what is happening, but I... I'm not really sure what else to say other than more explanation and description to be honest.
But besides that I think the story reads pretty well. Good story, but could use some more work to become extremely awesome. ^^
...what I'm personally quite surprised about is how no one has decided to collab with you on a good idea as this.
Off point though, I hope this helps.^^
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You're welcome!
I see you used my concept for Rarity's opposite from my story. I'm not mad would just have liked to been asked first.
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That's OK!
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Yes it's fine.
PFFT BWHAHAHAHA I LOVE THIS XD
Oh god. Not the cupcakes.