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Jeremy Llama


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Five years have passed since the main six have defeated Nightmare Moon.
Ponyville has lived in a peaceful time since then.
After Twilight and the gang had sealed Nightmare Moon, they thought they would never see her again. Until now.
Somehow Nightmare moon was able to come back without a host. In search for a host she thinks of only one pony and sets her sights on her; Princess Celestia.

This is a story I was thinking hard about. It wasn't going to happen but it is now. I am going to spend as much time as I can on this. If somepony out there would be kind enough to make a picture of the main six together in a wasteland setting and all of them looking ruffed up that'd be nice. (Ps I am NOOOOT an artist. I'm terrible at drawing XD)

Also if you could leave a like and an honest review that'd be nice. Thanks for reading. Also feel free to ask questions!

Put on Hiatus. I'm more into Horror at the moment so I fear that I'll just completely change this into horror if I work on it. "Nightmare In Ponyville" Current Project for a while.

Chapters (13)
Comments ( 19 )

Nightmare Sol, eh? Interesting...

The circumstance feels like a Mary Sue- like it has EVERYTHING they need and can handle everything easily.

Love it only technically 3rd chapter and shit already hit the fan!!
But wait.... Where's sweetiebell?

463416 That's explained in a future chapter.

463584 labeled ch.2 but technically ch.3 at the end the term "shit hit the fan" means things got serious I do enjoy the story so far and look forward to the rest.

463686 Aah ok thanks. Working on Apple Jack's and Rainbow's first chapter.

2 hours later CHAPTER 5 *Angelic singing starts

On a side note. My parole officer said he might have found me someone to publish a book I'm making (Non Mlp related.) Wish me luck! :pinkiehappy:

Good luck wait..... Parole officer? Explains all you're free time lol.

That cover pic.

Cutie Mark Templars for the win.

i love this! its so interesting!! :twilightsmile::twilightsmile:

"Hmmm" "What is it Apple Bloom? Something on your mind?" Scootaloo asked. "Well I've been noticing something..." Apple Bloom answered. "What?" Scootaloo asked. "Have you noticed the sun?" AppleBloom asked. Scootaloo looked up at the sun not knowing what AppleBloom was meaning. "The sun hasn't moved for these past three years." Apple Bloom said causing Scootaloo to freeze.

Scootaloo, how do you not notice the fact that it has been perpetual day for three years?

"Soooo Scootaloo can you remember three years back? Whenever I found you unconscious? Can you remember what happened to you?" Apple Bloom asked Scootaloo. "...Hmm..Nope." Scootaloo answered. "Nothing at all?" Apple Bloom asked. "Nothing. I just remember waking up inside some wooden cabin with you in it." Scootaloo added. "Well it's a good thing I did find you. You were cut up more then uh Jack o' lanern on Halloween." She said jokingly.

Nice analogy, but it's called Nightmare Night in MLP.

After a while she finished the suits of armor for Spike, Sweetie Belle, and for the other two Crusaders. "Well I hope this is enough. Are you sure you need to go?" Rarity asked. "Yes. I'm sure if I don't go then how will the Cutie Mark Crusaders be a whole?" Sweetie Belle said jokingly. Rarity chuckled. "All right Sweetie Belle." Rarity said. "Oh and Spike can you come here for a second?" Rarity asked.

I don't think Rarity is Omniscient. How does she know Scootaloo and Apple Bloom's measurements. It's been three years, so they have probably out-grown any measurements she might still have.

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