I've always enjoyed reading other great fan fictions and I've always had great ideas for ones of my own. Now I write to share those ides with every other fan of mlp,
Rainbow Dash visits Sweet Apple Acres to challenge applejack to a hoof wrestling rematch, only to find that she has disappeared. After looking for her, she and Spike find her in the barn doing something questionable. What do they decide to do? Join in, of course!
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We can dance if we want to
We can leave your friends behind
'Cause your friends don't dance and if they don't dance
Well, they're no friends of mine
So if they do dance then they are friends.
Okay, this gets an upvote cause the ending cracked me up. Such a simple, silly story. And written well, you just have a single paragraph that needs to be split up.
This is a subject change and should begin a new paragraph. Also, there are a few minor spelling errors that another quick run through would solve. Such as:
*flew* and the like. Still, great job!