One Cold Night, Eleven Warm Hearts

by ph0enix

Chapter 2

Author's Note:

Some people said that I should go into more detail about the lives of the ponies I shipped. So here you go. I've completed the Spikebelle chapter. Up next is Macdash.

Spike x Sweetie Belle chapter is now up

Comments

[The Yaoi Mistress]

I expect a very detailed MacDash fiction, explainning the points you made here!

[ph0enix]

4898218 don't worry, I plan on making a story for each ship. In fact my spikebelle one is already up Macdash is next.

[libertydude]

Oddly enough, the biggest problem with this story is its biggest strength. You spend a good chunk of the time describing other ponies relationships, but not really that of the main character. But I actually think that works for when the tragic reveal is shown.

On another note, I actually liked the pairings. While I'm not favoriting this story, I will most definitely check out these new stories that go in depth to their relationships. I feel you've got enough talent to really bring these relationships to life.