Ever since his arrival, Tik-Tik had begun to doubt the wisdom of sending such a great and skilled sneak as himself for this mission. Infiltrating the horse-things country had been pathetically easy...
*** Submitted as part of the EQD Outside Insight Summer Fanfic Contest ***
***Many thanks to TheCacophonousMuse for the awesome character sketch!***
This was extremely funny. I felt the ending was a little abrupt, though.
Seems to me that claiming to be a spy would be the last thing you'd want to do, given the situation.
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Thank you for the read and the kind words! I am never completely sure my comedy works for others, and feed back like this and that in your blog is extremely encouraging to me.
As for the ending, I actually have much more planned for this character and will be posting his continued adventures in a second story (planned out and currently writing. Should end up at 8 chapters)
To be completely honest, this story and its WIP sequel were supposed to be one in the same, but I ran short on time to make the contest and had to cut it short.
Anyway, in short, thanks for your time and encouragement! It really does mean a lot to me
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You're quite welcome. :)
Tik-tik is clearly not as smart as he thinks he is.