This story is a sequel to A New Life
These are the adventures of a young bat pony filled with fun, joy and a bit of mischief.
(edit: Featured on 9/23/15 Thank you all!!!!)
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Ive noticed a few spelling errors. But other than that, its really good.
5050754 If you're referring to Peanut Butter's Dialog it's because he's still a foal and he doesn't have speech down just yet.
5050783
Ok. sorry about that
5050795 It's ok.
loved it
5051950
Thank You :)
Update?
5090694 Working on it. It's in rough draft right now. I update it whenever I get the time to write it.
5090694 It is now updated :)
i loved it even more then the first part
5141003 Thank You :)
Hnnnnng. Too cute. You're quite the trouble maker PBB. I'm surprised m- *Star dust blown in my face.* -cough- sleepy time. *Fall over on the ground.*
5141346 Hehe She only blows star dust when I won't go to bed *star Dust is blown in my face* Night night *falls face first*
In all seriousness if things go good for me I'll probably have something late November. Yes I'll have a Christmas chapter in December.
I think this should be Lunar Shine chuckles a little as he gets closer to Peanut Butter.
Loved the update by the way
5206558 Thank you for pointing that out I fixed it. Shows how tired I am XD
5206591 No problem, its an easy mistake to make. One that I could very well end up making while I write my first fic.
Heart... my.... heart.... too.... cute..../\/\/\/\/\------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ *Heart flat lines from cutness.*
5208445 D:
Hmm... Has Celestia adopted a foal of her own to surprise everypony with? I wonder who the little figure was too. Please update soon. I wanna know more.
5335234 Part two will be updated hopefully before Christmas.
5335284
Yay.
I Mean:
I mean:
Too much?
i love the first part
i like it and please don't Peanut Butter Mother Princess Luna send him to Canterlot orphanage that would be not cool at all
5335718 That will never happen. However a change will be coming this upcoming summer
5335724 ok and is it going to be a good change or bad change that will be coming this upcoming summer
5335732 It's a good change.
5335754 k
What is peanut butter? He sounds like an Earth Pony
5336421 Peanut Butter is a Brown bat pony.
This could use a cleaning, but the story in general is very cute.
5386553 Thank You. That is the whole point of it is just to be cute. A couple new characters are on the way. I'm looking up proper punctuation so when I get the chance and know what I did wrong grammar wise I'll get it fixed up.
I liked this chapter and hope to see the future ones soon, but take your time. Don't rush yourself.
5649903 It wasn't that I rushed it. The topic itself was just hard to write about.
5649916 I didn't say you rushed this at all. I'm just advising not to rush the next one, which I'm sure you won't.
5649999 Yeah I refuse to rush any chapter I make.
5650048
I decided to read this after reading the story with the humane 5 + Sunset finding Peanut Butter. Glad I did.
5687766 Glad you like it :)
I just noticed that the title has a typo in it that you may want to fix. It says "aventures" instead of adventures.
5694048 Thank you for pointing that out XD I didn't notice that.
5694064
no problem. I can't believe nobody noticed that.
5694066 I'm surprised at that too.
Prince Peanut Butter I almost fell of my chair laughing! I can only imagine how it would be when he grows up. "Your royal highness, Prince Peanut Butter!"
Wow, well, that was dark. I hope somepony brings Peanut Butter back to his senses soon. Moon Dust lost his potential brother before they even got to know each other. I don't want them to become enemies.
5738980 I reassure you they won't be enemies.
5738984 Well, with the way things are set up, it almost looks as if they will be.
5738985 Give it time.
5738991 Okay. I just hope Peanut Butter comes back to his senses soon. I don't want the Moon Rage to win.
5738985
It might be interesting for them to fight at least a little, or have some misunderstanding that causes problems, though.
I don't know why, but I enjoy throwing wrenches into character relations. Having someone feel rejected is interesting to me for some reason. I'm not even an evil person.... but I am an evil writer