Hello everypony! I am Dispark! My stories tend to have a continuous storyline, so I recommend reading most of them.
Pinkie and Derpy are trying to destroy the 4th wall. Pinkie wants this so she has more characters to party with, well Derpy is just tagging along. This can only end well...
Special thanks to my friend who helped me edit and write this who chooses to go by the name Fire ball. Give a big hand for Fire ball
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Cool
Seems legit
4298673837246948576324635275/10 would read multiple times
You just posted the new chapter put it up. I neeeeeeeed it.
4903307 That was the I was looking for! You know, the longer you wait for something, the node you appreciate it! Since someone is begging for the chapter to go public, that's what I'll do! And maybe you can be a early access reviewer!
I like it.. I wonder what will happen next..
I completely forgot gummy. There is a few grammar errors but that's all. Has a nice set-up and I'm definitely in it for the long run.lets see where this goes but with something with this much potential now that the set-up behind the set-up (set-upception) this has to be done right as with a lot of potentially good set-ups it's all or nothing. Can't wait.
-Blazing Cat
How many times did I say set up?
Great story
Ah 4th wall breakage
Seriously this needs to go in the feature box...
(Not that I check that anyway ima mobile reader)
I completely forgot about Gummy.
Sweaty Bell, best typo of the decade.
4931770 Lol! Should I fix that or keep it as a lol?
4908020 Better not be counting gummy speaking for errors ;). It was meant to be that way when he spoke himself and pinkie spoke for him.
100000000000000 out of 10! BEST. STORY.
EEEEVVVVVVEEEEERRR!!!
My dogs live with cats, and i LOVE the fact that you said Gummy is too awesome to not be in this adventure! Also i did forget gummy :S
5624502 The cats and dogs thing was a reference to Ghostbusters. I also have 4 cats living with 3 dogs, so I know it is possible. Just a little reference, nothing important.
I personally thought it was good. It WAS forced, and it WAS rushed, but who cares? It's a 4th-wall shenanigans story. You can't ever expect it to be accurate.
I actually forgot about Gummy all together, until about right after she teleported away from Twilight's library the first time. YOu know when you have the feeling you are forgetting something? Yeah that happened. You know when you say something about someone completely forgetting he/she is right behind you, in which they react by smacking you upside the head? That figuratively happened when I remembered. Though I must say, you handled that aspect very nicely.
Signing out, VShuffler42