What would happen, after Madara Uchiha's death in the manga, his soul ended up in another world. After being defeated after a failed attempt at possesing a certain dragon,the dragon found himself with the abilities with the ninja world's &a
I think Discord Madara is okay but eventually he should have to fight the real Madara. Have the Discord Madara be severely toned down, but enough to take them on and leave them completely exhausted by the end of the fight. That will give you a good setup.
4854394 I have the idea that Madara is trying to revive himself through the copy, so they only have five minutes until Madara comes to true life and regains most of his powers (minus six paths powers)
4854511 I think it would be more productive if you just gave them a small taste of what Madara's like, thus giving them a reason to train harder than ever.
When Madara finally comes back for the last time (I'm not spoiling how), he'll be around the level he was in his last fight with Hashirama-just slightly higher than that level.
He won't have the powers given to him by the "Six Paths" or the cells from Hashirama (hence his "wood release")-due to losing those cells during the discord fight.
However, he will have all of his sharingan techniques....and his Susanoo's least-powerful technique can destroy a mountain.
awesome story so far The-Derpside , things are definitely getting good, so you said Hashirama's Cells would get taken away from him during the Discord fight, so your going to have Madara face Discord? Then Discord would use his powers to take away Hashirama's cells and the Rennigan, damn, that means we won't see Madara summon any meteors , Or will he summon one while fighting Discord?, but still in the anime and Manga, Madara was unstoppable, I mean he took on all of Gaara's 5th company and was decimating them lol, then after he faced off against all of the current Kage and was simply playing with them and beat them as well, Madara was a beast, but then again at the time he was a Reanimation that had literally unlimited chakra and ridiculous regeneration so he could've just spammed Susanoo on them, but still Madara might still be able to take on an entire army by himself, without Hashirama's Cells and Six Paths power, the only person in history to ever beat him one on one and even in general was The 1st Hokage Hashirama himself, So Madara's powers would probably only got reduced slightly after losing his rivals Cells and Six Paths Rennigan power, where would you put the level of Spike in all of Naruto? which is the strongest Naruto character that Spike can beat? Where does Spike rank in Naruto? With his current abilities, cause I'm pretty sure he isn't up to Kage level yet, so he should still be weaker then the current Kage who fought Madara and got decimated, while Madara has to be at least in the Top 10 strongest ninja, The 1st spot should belong to the Sage's Mother, I think, while the Sage could be 2nd, while his brother would be 3rd, then the sages children could possibly take 4th and 5th place, so Hashirama could be 6th while Madara would finish at 7th, so Madara could be the 7th strongest ninja, but that's just my take on it, where would you rank current Spike if he was in The Shinobi world? Cause Spike is right he has a LONG way to go to be remotely close to Madara's power
4876231 cause I just watched the Madara vs Alliance fight and Madara told Kabuto (who was linked through Mu) that Madara awakened the Rennigan prior to his 1st death as an old man, so he should have access to the Rennigan anyway lol, I also thought that the "Godly healing" was because of the reanimation? but still Madara would be considered a God without the wood release with all his ridiculous techniques and abilities, at this point Madara would be able to do to all the Royal Guards (Lunar Guard obviously included) he would treat them like the alliance, hell maybe you can have Celestia and Luna talk to the other nations like the Griffons, Minotaurs, Buffalo, Crystal Ponies to help fight Madara lol, heck even include the Changelings lol, I mean the 5 great nations had to come together to stop Madara, why can't all the different species in Equestria, also where would you rank current Spike in Naruto? what would be the strongest Naruto character that Spike could beat with his current techniques and abilities?
4908192 Would it be alright if I became an editor for this fic? I really like Naruto and while I like this fic it could use a bit of revision. Also something to think about, if you're going to bring Madara back with Discord then maybe have it just be a copy and then the real Madara actually takes it over.
5023053 Sweet, it's a bit late right now but I'll start editing them once I get up tomorrow. If you don't already have a google docs for them I'll go ahead and make some.
Ok, so madara is still a egostical jerk even as a illusion n' diamond dogs should stick to diggin up gems themselves instead of goin after ponies who r friends with a dragon ninja . Otherwise all i got to say is that was sweet yet short battle scene n' hope for moar chapters from ya as soon as u can get around to writin them
This was an entertaining chapter.
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This story's getting better and better. Keep it up
Madara is the Sepheroth of Naruto. No matter what you do he'll always find someway of coming back.
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Yeah. He held to life until Obito-a student of Naruto's Father-took over his plan for him.
Even then, one of the main goals was bringing Madara back to life.
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I'm still trying to improve as a writer
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I think Discord Madara is okay but eventually he should have to fight the real Madara. Have the Discord Madara be severely toned down, but enough to take them on and leave them completely exhausted by the end of the fight. That will give you a good setup.
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I have the idea that Madara is trying to revive himself through the copy, so they only have five minutes until Madara comes to true life and regains most of his powers (minus six paths powers)
4854511 I think it would be more productive if you just gave them a small taste of what Madara's like, thus giving them a reason to train harder than ever.
At first I was a little iffy about reading this, but I am glad I did. This is a great story.
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In a way, I agree with you.
When Madara finally comes back for the last time (I'm not spoiling how), he'll be around the level he was in his last fight with Hashirama-just slightly higher than that level.
He won't have the powers given to him by the "Six Paths" or the cells from Hashirama (hence his "wood release")-due to losing those cells during the discord fight.
However, he will have all of his sharingan techniques....and his Susanoo's least-powerful technique can destroy a mountain.
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Hey, you're a fan of Dj-Pon3?
I'll try to include her.
Loved it
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BTW... can you make sure no more trolls try to put it in "clopfics" to give it negative votes due to it being in the wrong group?
4864701 I'll try
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Damn, I wish someone who's awesome at drawing can draw spike in this fic.
awesome story so far The-Derpside , things are definitely getting good, so you said Hashirama's Cells would get taken away from him during the Discord fight, so your going to have Madara face Discord? Then Discord would use his powers to take away Hashirama's cells and the Rennigan, damn, that means we won't see Madara summon any meteors , Or will he summon one while fighting Discord?, but still in the anime and Manga, Madara was unstoppable, I mean he took on all of Gaara's 5th company and was decimating them lol, then after he faced off against all of the current Kage and was simply playing with them and beat them as well, Madara was a beast, but then again at the time he was a Reanimation that had literally unlimited chakra and ridiculous regeneration so he could've just spammed Susanoo on them, but still Madara might still be able to take on an entire army by himself, without Hashirama's Cells and Six Paths power, the only person in history to ever beat him one on one and even in general was The 1st Hokage Hashirama himself, So Madara's powers would probably only got reduced slightly after losing his rivals Cells and Six Paths Rennigan power, where would you put the level of Spike in all of Naruto? which is the strongest Naruto character that Spike can beat? Where does Spike rank in Naruto? With his current abilities, cause I'm pretty sure he isn't up to Kage level yet, so he should still be weaker then the current Kage who fought Madara and got decimated, while Madara has to be at least in the Top 10 strongest ninja, The 1st spot should belong to the Sage's Mother, I think, while the Sage could be 2nd, while his brother would be 3rd, then the sages children could possibly take 4th and 5th place, so Hashirama could be 6th while Madara would finish at 7th, so Madara could be the 7th strongest ninja, but that's just my take on it, where would you rank current Spike if he was in The Shinobi world? Cause Spike is right he has a LONG way to go to be remotely close to Madara's power
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We'll see Rin'negan and meteors (he has enough DNA left for those). Just no "godly healing" and no "wood release".
He already has Izanagi...,multiple S-ranked attacks, and the paths
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We'll see Rin'negan and meteors (he has enough DNA left for those). Just no "godly healing" and no "wood release".
He already has Izanagi...,multiple S-ranked attacks, and the paths
4876231 cause I just watched the Madara vs Alliance fight and Madara told Kabuto (who was linked through Mu) that Madara awakened the Rennigan prior to his 1st death as an old man, so he should have access to the Rennigan anyway lol, I also thought that the "Godly healing" was because of the reanimation? but still Madara would be considered a God without the wood release with all his ridiculous techniques and abilities, at this point Madara would be able to do to all the Royal Guards (Lunar Guard obviously included) he would treat them like the alliance, hell maybe you can have Celestia and Luna talk to the other nations like the Griffons, Minotaurs, Buffalo, Crystal Ponies to help fight Madara lol, heck even include the Changelings lol, I mean the 5 great nations had to come together to stop Madara, why can't all the different species in Equestria, also where would you rank current Spike in Naruto? what would be the strongest Naruto character that Spike could beat with his current techniques and abilities?
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Currently?....probably ZabuzA Momochi due to his scales being more resilient against blades (though that can be circumvented)
Quick question The-DerpSide: About Spike's Madara gear. Does this mean he has same hair-style as Madara did? Covering half of his face.
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No. But his head spines do point more toward his back
4908192 Would it be alright if I became an editor for this fic? I really like Naruto and while I like this fic it could use a bit of revision. Also something to think about, if you're going to bring Madara back with Discord then maybe have it just be a copy and then the real Madara actually takes it over.
5022923 sure. I can use an editor
5023053 Sweet, it's a bit late right now but I'll start editing them once I get up tomorrow. If you don't already have a google docs for them I'll go ahead and make some.
5023053 Hey you might want to change the cover to that nice piece of art Droll made you.
Ok, so madara is still a egostical jerk even as a illusion n' diamond dogs should stick to diggin up gems themselves instead of goin after ponies who r friends with a dragon ninja . Otherwise all i got to say is that was sweet yet short battle scene n' hope for moar chapters from ya as soon as u can get around to writin them
5023053 was the Chukuto a suggested weapon or your own idea? Because I did not read the comments of the other chapters so I can catch up.
I love it
Respect, bro. I, too, love Path_Of_Cloud.
You made a story based on my favorite Naruto character, Madara Uchiha! You are epic!
its good nice job
THIS BETTER NOT BE DEAD BECAUSE IF IT IS THEN YOU AND I WILL HAVE A PROBLEM MISTER!!!!!!!!!
4908192 Can you PLEASE update it already I am probably going to be 21 by the time the next chapter comes out!
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Sorry. I have been helping a friend.
He is...well..mtor put it bluntly, he has Depression
Why not combine the [Will of fire] and the [Curse of hatred] creating something unique, something that Maddara could never have or realize.
After all the will of fire is positive, while the curse of hatred is negative. Without one you can't have the other.