• Member Since 22nd Feb, 2013
  • offline last seen Jun 23rd, 2016

kbooms


Just another beginning writer trying to get some practice and feedback. Maybe someday I'll even write a story that isn't about Applejack!

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It ain’t always easy to see where a story starts or ends, even though everypony has one. Sure, there’s Granny’s little anecdotes about the one time when Grandpappy almost left Pa in the marketplace when he was just a little colt, barely able to walk on his own. Then there’s those big stories about the Princesses that span centuries of peace, punctuated with large, but generally short, sparks of unrest. Ones that take eons to see the connections and be able to tell it as history.

My story, though? I think I’m still in it. Makes the telling a mite harder, but I reckon it’s time I told at least a part of it. Used to think it’d never amount to much or be all that important, but now I wonder if it’ll help somepony else in the future. Here's hoping, anyway.


Photo courtesy of my good friend SilverMuse.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 1 )

Your descriptions are simply wonderful. I really have a clear image of what Big Mac is looking at and how the earth, the wheat, the apples, everything makes him feel. I think it's very interesting to tell this story from Mac's perspective. You also do an amazing job with the accents. I can hear their voices in my head when I read this. I can't wait to see what happens next! I want to give AJ a huge hug right now.

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