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Pacce


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Comments ( 20 )

Loved this story when I first read it on DA, glad to see it on FIMfiction!

It's actually very touching, glad I read it. 5 daaaaw faces out of 5.
:fluttercry: :applecry: :twilightblush: :rainbowkiss: :pinkiesad2:

Oh god I remember this it was and is still awesome:yay::rainbowdetermined2::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::ajsmug: also long ago I did a poem for this so here it is
"Pie" By Fillyfooler
Tension, such wonderful tension coursing through my veins,
Remember this oil slick fire that burns with water,
Inside the universe and on the other side of it,
Because these wonders could die,
But as always there is pie, such wonderful pies,
I know that this lie be fickle and fare but children should,
Never, ever, not in a million years find the,
Grinding of gears inside of your mind.

Hope you like it:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

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Thank you for the lovely poem, it made me laugh and go "awww" at the same time.:yay:

Aww....That was beautiful.

So romantic.

And sexy.

Awesome! :heart:

Awww:applecry::fluttershysad:!! I just love a happy fillyfooling story. I would love to rate it five stars because it was just excellent.:ajsmug::pinkiehappy::twilightsheepish::raritywink:

um... 6/6 stars?

::ajsmug::fluttershysad::pinkiehappy::rainbowderp::raritywink::twilightsmile:

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no comments for 15 weeks? let me change that
i honestly cant critisize this, very well written and good'n'sexy
have a moustache:moustache:

And here I was, thinking that you only wrote Fo:E related stuff. Boy was I mistaken! I honestly don't see how I've managed not to have subscribed to you yet. Mistake fixed. :twilightsmile:

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Haha, thanks.
Nah, I been writing stuff since before Season 1 was half over. I just haven't posted most of it here.

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I need a link to your deviantart/whatever acoount so I can build a shrine to worship you! :rainbowkiss:

I'm both shocked that this is one of the few erotic romances starring Lyra and Bon Bon and pleased that it makes up in quality what it lacks in quantity.

One of the few stories involving Bon-Bon and Lyra without some "weird" fetish, though Lyra on changleing was nice, and it is a fine one. The feels were abundant and of high quality, you have earned a fav.

Excellent work:twilightsmile:

Well that was a cute little story. LyraBon will always be one of my favorite pairings. First time I've ever seen Octy portrayed as Lyra's sister. Really cool concept. I'll be looking forward to reading more by you in the future.

I enjoyed this. It was very well written and interesting. Never seen Octavia portrayed as Lyra's sister before, I'd liked it

Ugh, stories like this disgst me... :twilightangry2:

...because they're so frickin' sweet and sugary! Blehhh the diabeetus approaches... :pinkiesick:

(Jk lol, here have a fave :trollestia:)

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