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Pretty big reason to be worried right there.
1420954 I think Twilight is too tightly wound up to be a mother/father, dood. and if she was sterile, Lyra would be pregnant with what would probably be Twilight's 5th foal.
And who says you can't use magic to make Twilight sterile, dood?
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Sterile: incapable of producing offspring.
Fertile: capable of producing offspring,
1421589 HOLY SHIT I AM SLOW, DOOD.....thanks for catching that.
EDIT: The change was made, dood. I am so ashamed. I read it as Twilight can't be a daddy, and then it clicked and I went "Oh crap. dood."
Wow, that was rather embarrassing, dood.
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See, this is what happens when you don't send the story back to me for a second review after the first round of changes are made
1422419 Aww man, I feel bad now. it was all minor stuff too, thought I could get away with it, dood.
I cleaneded up some mess in the Trixie chapter and the brand new Luna chapter. Mostly past tense shit that I evidently failed at and stuff that made me literally say out loud "What the fuck did I right, dood?" So it should look a little bit cleaner for proof-readers, Luna chapter still isn't done though, like 1.7k words, dood.
REALLY SORRY FOR MAKING THIS LATE, DOOD.
Evidently I have this on Password only for a Proof-reader, dood.
Hopefully when he is done, I'll have this story back up and running with a good Trixie chapter attached to it, dood.
twilight was rainbow dashes first?
1617791 I'm rather certain the story mentions that she did stuff with AJ and Pinkie, but Twilight busted her cherry, dood.
I'm almost certain I threw that in the story, I'll have to check, dood.
Edit: You double commented me, dood! You got me so bad, dood. I oughta watch what I am doing now, dood.
1617820 Yeah that's what i meant that Twi' was Dashie's first "Stallion"
1634919 Is it too late to say "I never said I was clever or smart, dood"?
This is an interesting story, and I love the premise behind it. Your editors are to be commended for this last chapter, there was hardly any tense changes among the verbs this time around. You really ought to have someone look at the first couple of chapters though. The grammar and misused words there almost ran me off. It was only because I noticed that you're the author that I stuck around.
All in all, a good effort. Keep it up, please.
1745806 Thanx, dood. Kinda wish I can release more but...I want the chapters to be read-able.
1911339 When I first wrote this...I was in the same boat as you...now I'm in the state where "I don't care, but happy that there are people that like it".
Hope you enjoyed the story as it is and not as a blemish on MLP fandom, dood.
1921067 So based on my limited smarts, I am assuming that the whole "Meta" thing comes from the whole "Daring is a fictional Character" ploy I have been using....It's fine, I know how to explain why...I just don't know how to put it into words.
I am glad you enjoy it...and
Well, i hope she becomes fertile soon. That way her panicking about becoming a father will be funnier.
Though i can´t wait to see Pinkie finding out about Dashie fucking Twi the whole night through. With Spitfire. xD
And i can´t wait for Daring´s return and the show-down between her and Pinkie to see who´ll be Twi´s marefriend. Given that its 1:5 in stallion to mare population, i wouldn´t wonder if such "mate duels" are actually quite common. xDDD
I was saddened when Twilight said that she was sterile
*Cough* If Twilight knew that she wasn't fertile, why was it a big deal when Pinkie told Twilight to pull out?
2539108 Pinkie didn't know that, Twilight didn't care where it happened and didn't care to educate her.
Also the Author probably made that decision right about... here.
1421589>>1421562 Typically sterile/virile is used in reference to males for reproductive viability and barren/fertile for females, a continuation of the whole seed/plowing theme. Plus if you use that, purely cultural, distinction it allows greater precision when talking about individuals like... I dunno... a purple unicorn with both a pussy and a dick? Is she completely unable to have children?(sterile/barren) Is she only able to father children but not get pregnant and give birth?(virile/barren) Is she only able to get pregnant and give birth but not father children with mares?(sterile/fertile) Can she give birth AND father children?(virile/fertile)
1421562 When did Twilight discover she was sterile? Because she didn't know that like a week before when she was with Pinkie.
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Oh, they will be back in later chapters... I MAY have read Chapter Eleven: Quest for the Ernydom! first because I was curious whether that was Erny(something)+(king)dom or Erny(something)+dom(inatrix)... it was neither.
3331102 Yeah, that much was covered in story but it was the most relevant example to highlight the complexities of such an individual and the merit of the more colloquial system. cdn.meme.li/i/p18mj.jpg
(moved from end of story to relevant chapter... ALSO LIKE A BOSS!)
Why wasn't there a taste the rainbow joke in this chapter? I am slightly disappointed in you Prinny. I know you're trying your hardest but, if you keep missing opportunities like that I'm going to let Etna toss you around a bit. (Been playing so much Disgaia 1 & 2 lately it isn't even funny. The polite character is supposed to be Adel from 2... he's weirdly polite when talking to monsters.)
It's a little sad that Twilight's sterile, maybe a certain Princess can help her with that I think I read in a later chapter she reveals she can't produce eggs either, now someone should definitely help her with that one.
1420954 first I loved it all it was awesome and funny
And I can't wait to see what happens between them all next and what happens next to them all.second I also hope she becomes Fertale soon that would be awesome beyond awesome and funny beyond funny.And to find out who would get pregnant by her first.And I hope that she can get pregnant to and that the first guy to do it is Big Mac.
Wus' 'dood' mean?
I love this story so far, but really is Twilight really "sterile" as you have her say that to Spitfire or did she lie about that, I think it would be good if she isn't sterile if she ever wants to start a family with other mares.
... Young Chryssie? :B
I imagine Twilight would have to emulates quite a few moves with her magic, with her not having fingers and all.