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Well luckily you pulled through. Otherwise we'd have missed out on a good writer.! Born with Johndus myself (or hoiwever thats spelled)
Not a bad chapter all in all, thanks!
Waiting for more
4907418 Thanks for the vote of confidence, dood. I'll try and get everything done quickly, dood.
4907426 It seems that way, dood.
How was getting mega raped by Twilight and losing Alpha status to Twilight walking away scot free? I know you love OP Twilight but damn.
4907779 I'm guessing it's because she took that loss with stride, dood. One of the proof-readers aid that she got off rather easy all things considering, so I made it a bit worse by adding more to the end of the sex scene,
you forgot to mention which of the mini chapters won the poll
4908072 Oops, sorry, dood. It was Mating Season and as a Special bonus, I also did Trixie's Special Magic as a bonus for Wrabbit and because that and I'm gonna try and have them both out by my birthday, dood.
Great And yay more Twilight Velvet!
Is lovegazem going to be a thing? Oh dear Celestia I hope it becomes a thing I so would love to see that again. It's also way to hilarious to see Chrysalis get beaten by it.
That was fun. Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work.
Yaay for Cherry definitely getting jubileed.
Weirdest thing I can think of? given Chrysalis and the changelings not using the herd for breeding, would be Zecora, the Giant Spider, the spiderlings, and hordouve twiclones.
Gotta say I didn't see Cherry getting left with a little surprise. Guess that means she really will have a damn good reason to come to Ponyville in the future.
Good question though...is Evilight what comes of Twilight and Juliet merging or Juliet taking over completely? Evilight pretty much admitted she managed to go through the Alpha mode and come out remembering what happened. Makes me wonder what will happen when Twilight learns to snap to sense in the heat of things.
Childbirth is beautiful. Not that I'm a father and have first hand experience.
Know what, eggs are even more gross. The baby still has a sack around them, and all bubbly and what not.
One reason I'm glad I don't have a vagina.
Ha, nice!
That's good, someone to control their alpha when she gets crazier than usual.
Is every mare in this world gay? I am not complaining, but it gets old. Yes, I'm talking about Sweets and Scoots too.
Ahh, I see, not quite lesbian then. Still, I thought futas were rare? I count four in this generation, three living in Ponyville! Still not complaining, this gonna be good, but exactly how often can we expect them?
Uhh, she's actually mine. So...yeah.
Don't forget, she's not allowed to use them any more.
That explains a lot.
No wonder she's an Alpha. I want to see more of Cherry Jubilee.
That's new.
Twilight Velvet gets fucked by her daughter! Whoo! When cab we expect that? Please don't make me wait, I'll reread the Mothers Day chapter in the meantime.
I was born with the alembic cord wrapped around my neck. I nearly died.
While the clop was good, as usual, Chrysalis freaking out and vomiting because she thinks pony childbirth is disgusting was hilarious and the crowning point of the chapter. Many lols were had.
I'll be honest here; this is not my favorite chapter. Rape is a huge turnoff for me, and kinda puts the whole chapter in a bad sort of light, unless the rapist gets whats coming to them (usually a total curbstomp). I was hoping it would be more consensual, but it is what it is. That aside, it could do with another once-over with an editor. Numerous spelling and grammatical errors abound. While it was nice to see Cherry Jubilee again, I would have liked it better if she weren't so... rapey. The scenes with Chrysalis were a hoot, and for foals! Also, I'm glad that Twilight Velvet is getting a reprise with her daughter, for realz this time.
I couldn't imagine how i would feel if a baby in my family was born not-breathing and deathly white. Such thoughts are unsettling and i'd not wish such events on anyone.
Most excellent chapter.
Okay, childbirth is painful, but not "human painful." Women go through far more pain in labor than any other mammal. That's not to say it is not painful for others, but human women suffer much more. Why do no writers realize this?
Please, PLEASE let Twilight impregnate her mother.
"Oh, you want my baby don't you mom? You want grandkids? Well here you go! Now get ready for the next round! I knock 'em up in one round, but your special, and I don't want to miss."
Twilight Velvet: Is that all you got sweety? I did not raise a daughter to give up after an hour!
“Damn it, that unicorn knocked me up.”
Take that you motherfucking asshole.
Chryssie saves the day! And her coming from love energy alone was hilarious.
I actually prefer futa with balls, there's something mesmerising in how they bounce around.
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The doctors that helped me into the world thought I was like that. Turns out, I’m a natural page-white color and I was born sleeping. The cold did not wake me up.
im confident in you making this story unique to you hopefully making the remaing pages of this qouteunqouyte book is really creative