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Almost 25k words. Awesome. Can´t wait to read it (again).
FUCK YOU! HOW COULD YOU POST THIS RIGHT AS I'M ABOUT TO GO TO WORK!? FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU-
Anyways, I'll be sure to read the shit out of this as soon as I get off (and then get off again iykwim ). Also, I added this to the Twilight Sparkle group for you and will revise the romance submission myself as I learn more about what's going to happen (I'm suspecting harem-route, but we'll see. As long as Chryssy is there to stay )
2638849 Dude, Twi x Cake would be hot as fuck. Mrs. Cake is THE HOT SHIT. Do it, filly.
2646987 I didn't change much since the lats time you stared at it and let the words rape your eyeholes, dood. But I hope you enjoy it, dood.
2646999 I'm sorry, dood. It would have been ready earlier if google.docs didn't fuck up my indents, dood. And I'm writing a chapter of Twi x Cakef now for the mini-series as we speak, dood.
right now i hate you
the chapter is awesome i loved proofing it
however the options you have given for the next chapter are crule i want them all but in order of wants
1. applejack (take this as my vote)
2. lyra and bon-bon
3. fluttershy
4.colgate (if you do go with that fetish for the irony)
5. flur
but as i said i want them all
however i dont think its time for flutters yet twilight is still to uncomertable with the situation she's fine when she is in the middle of it but she always feels bad after (though it has been getting less it is still there) and fluttershy is too inocent she would feel awful and feel like she raped her even if shes fine with itso back to my point it is still too early for fluttershy but it isn't far off
2647042 Gotcha, dood. Fluttershy is on the fence of 'not sure if want' and 'all my want' with the explanation chapter up, I just never built it at all, dood. So I guess you're right, but if I do happen to be brought into a fluttershy clop, I'm not going to make it rape, I'm going to make it so mutual that anypony that walks in on it will think 'god damn, it's too adorable to interrupt,' dood.
My only gripe with Fluttershy is typing her name, I have a tendancy to capitalizing her 'L' as I type her name so it would look like FLuttershy, instead of Fluttershy, dood.
HOLY SHIT, I'M FEATURED, DOOD!
Ya'll are beautiful bronies and pegasisters if you would like to be called that, dood.
THANK YOU ALL, DOOD.
2647055
no i know twi will never force Fluttershy but she knows how easly she gives in to pressure so even if flutters was ok with it twi will feel that she pushed her into it and when you force someone to have sex that is rape ergo in twis mind when she calms down it will be rape
2647071 I see your point, dood...uggh, another thing I gotta keep in mind, dood.
Flutters, please!
2647082
to get around it you need flutters to initiate the encounter but twi has to be comfertable with her current situation in general
2647106 Yea... good thing I hinted that Fluttershy might be interested in Twi-cock, dood.
Fluer de Lis
I was gonna vote AJ. But seeing possibility of pregnancy under Flutters changed my mind. Yus plz. :3
Only about half way through the latest chapter so far, but I have to be blunt here. The grammar in the chapter is terrible. I don't remember it being an issue with earlier chapters, but this one has incomprehensible sentences and nearly constant changing between the present and past tenses. I think I even caught AJ say "Cya". That's like having a character say "lol".
I love this story, so I'm going to continue to read this chapter, but this is very difficult to get through.
2647162 WHAT! FUCK, dood.
I'll try and fix it, Is it the WHOLE chapter or just certain parts, dood?
applejack.
>Inflation
>hoping for cum inflation
>i was tricked, there is no inflation
This is a crime.
It's murder.
2647204 Oh...I'm sorry, let me change the tags then, dood.
Breast expansion? I wasn't thinking when I added add that and thought it meant for breast inflation as well, dood.
2647207
Haha, ty, I really like cum inflation and was extra excited when I saw that tag, but it's still a great chapter even without it. I'm hoping Chrysalis makes some more permanent returns in the future, too
2647253 I'm glad you liked it, dood. Sorry for the tag-confusion...which reminds me...I gotta add pegging to the Thunderlane chapter, dood.
Thanks to a commenter, I'll try to fix the weird grammar problems I didn't do shit about earlier, dood.
When I get the time, dood. I already fixxed a few things but I never had great makr sin english so, I asked my hero to save me...if he wants to save my ass again, dood.
Alright, I finally finished that behemoth of a chapter. Grammatical errors aside, this was the best chapter of the story yet. I like that we seem to be getting some character development out of Twilight, since she seems to have, at least subconsciously, accepted her herd. I'd love to see her fully accept it and be open about it. I'd also love to see Celestia's reaction, heh.
2647392 Alright, cool. Revisions to what I fucked up and underway, dood. Thanks for letting me know, dood.
Find out my story was featured and the latest chapter is full of grammar issues and confused tenses...how embarrassing, dood.
Big chapter is big! Not bad, dude. Not bad at all.
Next, let us have some Applejack! Because Fluttershy is shy and getting to her too quickly would just be weird.
I'm also hoping for some more Luna, and eventually, some Celestia. But I guess that's for later, if it actually happens.
Keep up the good work!
2647427 Huh, I figured Lyra and Bon-Bon would get some looks since a few chapters ago everyone wants Lyra to get her ass handed to her by Bon-Bon, dood. Not that I'm complaining, dood.
Fluttershy, was really looking forward to AJ but the whole impregnation thing makes a thousands votes Fluttershy for me
2647488 Alright, dood.
SO will chryssilis be joining the herd.
Also i like the fluttershy idea with all of its possibilities, but i hope to see all of them eventually, please say that they will all be written eventually and i will give you a cute derpy and dinky picture
2647488
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admitidly for me i want to vote for flutters due to the preg alone but i feel that twilight needs to accept her position as alpha in otherwords she needs to be HONEST with herself and reed my prev posts as to fluttershy
thats why in my opinion that fluttershy has to be the last element
2647542 Of course they will all be added eventually, dood. And I dunno about Chrysalis, I'm probably going to make her a psuedo-member of the herd, dood. (As in, she wants to salvage her dignity that she lets a purple mare mount her ass while also wanting Twilight's D, dood)
I want Octavia!
2647580 Octavia was already fucked, dood.
2647059
You deserve it man, you deserve it. Told ya this chapter would be your turning point of your fic. Was i right or wasn´t i?
2647027
I really hope that doesn´t got for some of those mistakes like "With this the feelings of pony x are calrified-" right after a sex scene.
2647082
Dont worry, you got me for that if you are at a point where you need a second opinion.
2647167
I believe that would be my parts from our pms. I never was good with the whole english grammar.
2647436
Yeah, weird. I expected Lyra too. Guess you´ll have to give her a small scene in the next chapter to rise the interest in her "punsihment" as well as if Lyra similar to the others have an interest to join Twi´s future herd/if Bon-Bon wants to try the D of Twi too. The herd though is still not fully decided by Twi yet which is good as it would be weird to see her jumping into a herd, a practise which died out 600 years ago vs marriage, espically given that she´s still in a relationship with Daring who ofc isn´t keen to see Twi having sex with so many other females than her, Though the fundament for a herd is there: 6 Ponies so far who have regulary sex with Twi and aren´t in a relationship with another pony, confirmed feelings on both sides and ofc the orgy of this chapter. And lots and lots of possible intern and extern problems regarding Twi and her herdmates. XDDD
2647400
Told ya so.
I´ll read the chapter later. Again congrats for being featured.
2647589 In which chapter?
2647552
Then here is your cuteness coma
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2647616 Oh that is adorable, dood. Good thing I don't have a heart anymore, or the resulting heart attack would have been painful, dood.
2647614 The 'What happens in Manehattan' chapter, dood. Octavia, VInyl Scratch, and Twilight all had a threesome, dood. I try to update the description with a decent table of contents, dood.
2647613 Alright, for the Lyra thing, I guess I underplayed her in this chapter, but that's understandable since we shoved AJ down the reader's throats this time, and since I hinted that I may have Fluttershy pregnant with Twilight's child, voting is neck and neck between those two, dood.
I asked hwrogers to look it over for me, and I'll fix what needs to be fixed, dood.
UPDATE: I revealed the surprise I've been saving for Colgate/Berry Punch chapter, dood. Hopefully to mix up the votes a tad, dood.
2647436
Frankly? I'd sort of forgotten about that. Completely. Whoops.
How embarrassing... Still, I figure Lyra will get hers soon enough.
I vote Lyra and BonBon. Lyra is long overdue for her "punishment". But after that I will vote AJ so prepare to drop a lot of hints.
2647754 I...uh... One moment, dood. I'm going to have to change it to say that Twilight 'shares' the love with Chrysalis so that, dammit, dood. Why did you have to find an inconsistency?
2647773 Alright, the blame is mostly mine anyway for failing at finding that point, dood. Twilight is offically 'sharing' her herd's love with Chrysalis so they don't starve, dood.
Congratz on the Feature
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2647780 I know, dood. I grew a third peg-leg when I saw it, then it fell off when some one told me about weird grammar issues that I was told to be done later today, dood.
2647812 I just want to improve my story as time goes, dood. If I manage to get all the mistakes with Proof-reading and my look-throughs, sweet. But I always value painful criticism, dood.
Well, it was fun being on the feature list for a few hours, dood.
But I wanna share the current results of the voting, dood, and my thoughts on it.
+Applejack: 5
During the Thunderlane chapter, I always figured AJ would be last, dood. No skin off my hide, dood.
+ Fluttershy: 3
Due to this chapter's teasing at AJ, I can sorta agree with the consensus that Fluttershy should be last, dood. But I've always been a prinny that let's fate decide, dood. Also, I hate typing Fluttershy's name, dood, I always accidentally capitalize her 'L', dood.
+ Lyra/Bon-Bon: 1
I figured this would get more votes considering all the people that wants Lyra get punishment for blackmailing Twilight and fooling around behind Bon-Bon's back. By the way, Bon-Bon will have a mini-revenge chapter in the mini-series, dood. After I decide whether or not I should type that or the Twi/CakeF chapter, dood.
+ Fluer de Lis: 1
Looking over my notes, I think I'm going to change how Twilight fucks her if she occurs, dood. Give me some time, dood.
+ Colgate/Berry Punch: 0
I am sure everyone thought it was sorta funny when I threw out the oral fetish, but if you checked in roughly a half hour ago, you will find that COlgate has been planned to be a futa as well as Twilight...which will lead to Berry getting pounded by two mare cocks and possible other things, dood. I dunno, this I dea has been around since the Luna chapter, dood.
I hope you enjoyed reading, and I'll continue to try and please your ocular senses to the best of my ability, dood.
2647858
for the Flutershy thing write it without capitals then once you are finnished use search and replace
also regarding colgate dont give her the exact same condition as twilight only have it be similar (or maby a direct desendent of great canopy)
Great chapter, and nice usage of Chrysalis transformation ability to have Twilight come more to terms with her other growing problem (the harem).
Decision time! I'll just stick with my guns and say Colgate again, Prinny Watson!
2647923 Alright, dood!
2647921 I guess I could do that, dood.
2647921
did i just sujest changing your nationality too finnish?