• Member Since 23rd Jul, 2014
  • offline last seen Jul 29th, 2014

My Little Prophet


To chase my wishes, I'll carry on living. And I will always remember the depths of the darkness. I'll face my demons, and I will no longer run away.

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When Sun Chaser's mother dies, he feels empty inside. Twilight Sparkle begins to notice this, and she tries to cheer the stallion up. Soon, she gets caught up in Sun Chaser's desire to bring his mother back to life. But little does he know that playing God has deadly consequences.

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This has problems. It tells too much and shows too little, the OC needs a better explanation and more characterization before I could buy him being Twilight's friend, and finally, this is far too rushed.

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