The Royal Princess Summit is under way and the inhabitants couldn't be more stressed. The unexpected arrival of a long time rival of Celestia causes problems almost immediately. Twilight tries to make peace between the two but it becomes clear that something sinister is ahoof. It all becomes clear when the student of said rival mysteriously disapears and Twilight as well. When Twilight shows up first under suspicious circumstances, can Private and friends prove her innocence? Or will Twilight have to give up her title prematurely?
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Chapters (7)
Hoo boy, this is not gonna be pretty. Even leaving out the whole "somepony's gonna get murdered/killed/deathed" thing, this cannot end well.
You can almost smell Soleil's arrogance...
3785762 Smell her arrogance? I can practically taste it. This can only escalate quickly.
I get the oddest feeling that I'm going to want to strangle Soleil
3785762 3786051 I can practically see it!!!
I feel like Soleil's student already knows something bad 's gonna happen here. And why wouldn't she?
3786060 Who won't want to strangle her?
Well this is going to explode, and not into confetti either. I also have to agree that somepony needs getting knocked off the ladder, never mind taken down a few pegs.
3786119 I know right she's just so arrogant and annoying and we only seen her in a couple of paragraphs. I wouldn't be surprised if she's the bad guy
Oh no...I feel there is going to be major heartbreak in this one...for the student and guard I mean. Also, clever name with Celestia's cousin...and...
more foreshadowing at Luna on the brink of snapping. I cannot wait for more of this.
Oh my Gosh. Private is going to be a solider of love again. This is going to be a circus once the how summit starts. Great job adding the suit in. I was wondering if it would be made when Private was older or this season. I wonder, has Twilight talked to Private about Twinkle or not?
Jesus Christ.....no wonder Celestia had issues with her dad before he was defeated.....If it wasn't for the mare, I would say that Soleil is really Lunard's daughter and Celestia isn't.
I kinda want Luna to litearally just snap at her, not just show her disdain in her eyes. I want some fisticuffs, like back in "Among Alicorns" (that is the name of that story, right?
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3786428 Yes that is the name
Oh fun, Soleil is arrogance incarnate and this is going to be fun wondering how long before Luna or Celestia finally snap.
Maybe SHE'S the one Blueblood is related to, not Tia.
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Wow, you updated fast.
Either way, that Soleil rubs me the wrong way, and I believe everyone here would agree with me. However, I wouldn't be too quick in saying that she's the bad guy in this case. Sure, it might had been obvious with Tru'sent, Ele'sium, and Loki in the last two cases, but I like to remain optimistic...who knows, Spera might be making his debut once more.
Wasn't expecting such a fast update, Soleil is just proving to be a major arrogant jerk again...., still have my suspicions about her.
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3786137 As long as she's not the bad guy, I'm good. I mean, in case 7 it was obvious who the villains were. I'd rather there be somepony else behind the scenes pulling strings or something.
So, Twilight and Gloaming go to the library, but Gloaming gets kidnapped from her room? Interesting.....
Where is Twilight though? Where is she? Man this is going to be Bad!!!
Two updates in one day?
Well...this is going to be interesting. I smell a setup.
well they're boned
When i was reading this and read Gloam's last name, i just want to ask: is she related in any way to the Glimmer in season one or was it just a coincidence.
3790892 Coincidence
You know what, I actually don't think Soleil (the arrogance makes me want to hurl) will be part of whatever crime this is. My guess: Spera.
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Somepony's just created their own conspiracy board...
3791554 Again? That's the third time this month.
Hmm. Maybe Changelings are involved here, if the guard said she was kidnapped from her room. Perhaps Solei isn't the villain. Or maybe I'm messed up. To dinner!
Lets reviw the currently know facts (well the ones I could find) Gloam is kidnaped from her room, yet the last known location of her was the library with Twilight. From these facts I can only conclude that Twilight did it. But I know there's more to it then that. For now thoe Twilight is sadly the number 1 suspect. EDIT: a fact I missed was that her room was broken into, so someone ealse could of easily down it, but sadly this fact dosn't change much for poor Twilight...
3794825 No offense, but it is very obvious that it's not going to be Twilight Sparkle. Sure, a few chapters will be spent with her being the prime suspect, but it should work out in the end for all the good guys. Season 2 Cases 4 and 5 aside, of course.
3795288 None taken, But I should probiltsay that I do not think Teilight is actually the real villain in this story (and will never be, at least not within her own mind) despit the evidence and her last whereabouts.
Excuse the spelling errors in my last comment, for some reason it's not letting me edit it. (Also I'm on mobile so t kindof sucks right now)
Glimmer's Alicorn mutagen? I smell something. The smelly smell of something that smells suspicious. Maybe Gloam isn't all that innocent as we believe.
Skyla just got poked by something that could be considered medical waste. Should we be conserned?
3806215 She just got pricked by the needle, I doubt it will hurt her too much, what with her being an alicorn and all.
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Or maybe Soleil was pressing Gloam so much to reach her standards of "perfection" that the young unicorns took a desesperate route to furfill her teacher´s aspirations.
Maybe Warden knew about it, and he was trying to keep her away from drugs.
Oh no, not Glimmer again!
Oh boy. How could Glimmer's stuff be tied into this? Sounds completely fishy.
Oh boy. What is going to happen? Where are those two. Best of luck Private, you're going to need it. Nice Chapter Jacoboby1, Keep it up. Also is the cover for this case still going to be made?
3807145 Sadly, yes
Glimmer again, just how many things was she tied to and now I'm curious to just how does she seemed to be involved so often.
3807532 Sadly? Is that to Private needing some luck or to the cover art?
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Better safe then sorry.
Oh dear...
Good idea not to argue with Pinkie Private.
Also since you brought up the asgardians a story or two ago I would like to throw a villain request out there.
Just when I thought Soleil couldn't be any more of a bitch, you go and prove me wrong.
That being said, another chapter well done. Have one of these on me:
Is there anything redeemable about Soleil at all? Well done on the chapter though, wasn't expecting Gloam to be the one who owed those syringes.
.... What? I've always been good at making theories about villains. You should see my theory on Ulfric Stormcloak.