Silver Spoon and Scootaloo could never get along. A class project forces them to.
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Nnnooooooooo..... D:
Noooooooo....
What in the hell, Apple Bloom?
Holy crap! This story got featured!
Silver Spoon really is broken. She has no self-confidence and an extremely low view of her own self-worth. All those years hanging out with Diamond Tiara really did a number on her.
The worst part of this chapter is that we have to wait a while before the next one.
5176586 Exactly.
~Crystalline Electrostatic~
You need another chapter. Stat please!
Wow. I knew this chapter would be a train-wreck following the previous one...but not to this extent
WHAT THE FUCK?!?!?!
HOW CAN YOU LEAVE US AT A CLIFFHANGER LIKE THAT?! NOW WE HAVE TO WAIT!!
*coughs and clears throat*
Please continue
Well you know what, Applebloom? I'm gonna read some gay Applebloom ships just to spite you!
Well I can't say I didn't see this coming, but still…
Damn you author! DAMN THE FEELINGS!
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One Sugar.... No milk!? I'm afraid Silver Spoon simply would never be able to cut it in English society.
Sorry had to try and get some humour out of this fantastically heart wrenching chapter.
Either way great chapter, very powerful.
5176971 Oh my god that gif made me laugh so hard I hit my knee on the table.
......OW!!!! I think my heart just died! Dang! I knew this chapter was gonna be harsh but I wasn't expecting THAT! Just....ow! Also what was that Apple Bloom meant by 'that night'? Sounds incriminating.
Anyway, I continue to highly enjoy this fic and your writing style is so well done and very inspirational to myself to step up my own writing abilities. The very fact that I care so much regarding the fallout of this chapter just goes to show what an amazing job you've done thus far to get me invested. I don't know where Scoots journey will go from here, but I can't wait to read it!
God fucking damnit you just had to go all applebigot on us didn't you
Seriously, what is is it with this week and updates, I have midterms. I'll get to this in a couple of days once I work through the rest of my list. I can't wait though
A cliffhanger?!
You bastard!
You total bastard!
5177083 Actually....I believe she'd do that. Flight to the Finish kinda made me dislike her...
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Why'd Flight to the Finish make you hate AB? And I wouldn't think she'd go all, 'you and your parents are unnatural freaks and you disgust me'.
5177083 Well-it was stated Earth Ponies are kinda *cough* Though, being raised by AJ should have taught her better. (AJ didn't approve, but she didn’t care that Octavia and Vy was like that. In fact, she never treated her nasty or anything. ) AJ's reaction will be priceless because Apple Bloom, essentially, just abandoned her. She essentially told her friend something so personal. It took balls to admit it, but..AB..AB just destroyed any chances she can have with her as a friend. Sweetie Belle to a lesser extent.
Wow...so Apple Bitch came out to play...
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True. And I agree AJ's reaction is going to be priceless, and after all that poison against Scoots and her entire family. AJ's going to be pissed. But more so when Vy storms over and chews her ear off [AJ] for AB cutting out Scoots heart and taking a dump on it, while saying what she said about her [Vy's] and Tav's relationship. As well as her scathing words when Scoots was trusting her.
And I agree she just flushed a good chunk of a lifetime of friendship, for nothing. Sweets though, when she bawls to Rares. Will hopefully work to fix things since even with all the Vitrol against homosexuality she had, Sweets cares for Scoots more than her opinion about sexuality. And never said anything bad about Scoots moms.
5177440 Because, it made her act out of character badly. Pre Season 4 Apple Bloom wouldn't have abandoned her friend and call her a 'quitter' or something similar. Over Flight at least. In fact, I would have thought she was totally against it. I mean, Cutie Pox shows she has a similar if not slightly worse problem she has to contend with similar to Scootaloo's flight:Cutie Mark. Plus, she feels she's not at all similar to her family in regards to running the farm. She can't cook, sell, etc. It feels weird when she kinda just bashes her for this problem because she's getting fussy. AB's facing similar problems, just not to a natural extent. However, her actions in that episode made her look shitty since they play on the jokes she started. It made her actions in prior episodes...look poor?
Flight to the Finish was a Scootaloo equivalent to Cutie Pox in regards to the character's obsession. If anything, Apple Bloom would understand even more.. if she was willing to abandon her friend for a competition, what would she do?
5177454 Its more so the fact she actually did that after Scootaloo confessed. When a person does it, its just so hard to admit to just anyone. People die fir making a mention of it. It takes so much trust and care to admit your a fillyfoaler. AJ would hear just that and get mad. AJ's personal beliefs don't trump her beliefs on family or friendship. Apple Bloom just attacked both worse than anything Diamond Tiara has ever done. Apple Bloom, most likely will apologize, but will Scootaloo TRUST her again? Probably not.
Sweetie Belle has a chance since unicorns typically aren't very judgmental on that aspects since they CAN be in same sex relationships and, magic related, can have kids. Plus, only AB was a bitch towards her for THAT aspect even prior. Sweetie still needs to own up to it though. She could be forgiven..but time..
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Every Apple seems to have the same three personality quirks that make them a challenge to deal with: pride, stubbornness, and zealotry. They are universally quick to anger when challenged, tend towards the most severe solutions (think Look Before You Sleep and Bats!), and are hard to dissuade from their beliefs. That's where Apple Bloom is right now. Scootaloo is somepony she trusted implicitly, and finding out she's been lying to them about something so shocking and important (to AB, anyway) is a huge blow. She's upset. She's angry. She's confused. But all of those emotions take a backseat to her pride, which she reflects here in the worst possible way.
Understand, of course, that this whole confrontation is as shocking to all three Crusaders as it is to you. I'm certain they've all imagined what it would be like to 'come out' or to have one of their friends 'come out' before, but I assure you none of them ever thought it would pan out like this.
There's more to this whole catastrophe than anypony has revealed or discovered yet. That'll come later. Right now, everypony's just retreating to their corners and licking their wounds. We'll see what happens when they have to interact again.
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You make fine points. I hope the Author touches upon them .
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Just saw this notification XD. But yeah, I hope we see the Crusader's interact with their family before their interactions with each other. But yeah, seeing them interact with each other again.
But seriously, good chapter. This build up was shocking, but with how powerful the emotional impact was over this alone. Shows how good you are at writing your characters, and building up a good story.
5177521 Even then, with Bats, Personal beliefs don't trump her beliefs on friendship. AJ even giving Fluttershy the prized Apple.
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Eventually, sure. But was also deeply dismissive of Fluttershy's suggestions, even ridiculing her opinion on the bats' value and motivations. She, along with the rest of the mane 6, made it a point to bully Fluttershy into doing something she didn't want to do for personal reasons. For 15 minutes of that episode, AJ was way more focused on her farm and her own personal opinion about the bats than she was about her friend. Similarly, she spends the bulk of Look Before You Sleep deriding everything that Rarity holds dear and intentionally antagonizing her. She's obviously not alone in that, but in both cases she's letting her pride and her zeal get in the way of her devotion to her friends. It isn't until her first idea--the one she refuses to compromise--falls through with catastrophic consequences that she realizes what those ideas (trying to get rid of the bats in Bats! and trying to pull the loose branch down with her lasso in LBYS) have done to her friends (Flutterbat and having a freaking tree fall through Twi's bedroom window respectively).
I'm not saying AJ or AB aren't good friends, I'm just saying they have certain personality quirks--as all Apples seem to--that keep them from being good friends all the time. It's not unique to them; all the ponies occasionally let their flaws get the better of them. I'm just exploring AB's in this sense because she's the one that Scootaloo's admission affects most deeply.
5177573 True, true can't lie on that one. Still-makes me want to pair her up with Scootaloo in spite lol. (I did already, but so what?)
Dang...
Noooo, why would you leave it like that? That's just not right. I feel pretty bad for Sweetie. She doesn't know how to feel.
Jesus H Christ, can no one in this story ever catch a fucking break? .....good story btw
Probibly my main fear about my friends and my parents
I'd be quick to condemn Applebloom and AJ here but the simple fact is that in a family structure like the Apples, procreation matters, really REALLY matters. More blood relations means more expansion and more hooves to continue making sure that they're never in too desperate need of hired laborers plus the all important matter of making sure that the farm stays a family asset to be handed down as each generation gets too old for the manual labor side of the business.
It's still a little backward to have a hatred toward fillyfoolers or coltcuddlers but it's ingrained in their beliefs for a reason and it's a good enough reason to forgive them for being a mite stubborn about it.
Screaming at Sweetie for most likely just being confused though, that's a dick move Scoots. Go apologize when you calm down.
please wake me up next month, when the next chapter is out
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Cheerilee: O_O
Scootaloo: o_o
Cheerilee: O_O
Scootaloo o_O
Cheerilee: YOU WANNA BE TREATED LIKE ADULTS, YOU GONNA ACT LIKE 'EM. /backhoof
This story great so far Though here comes a potted plant, an anvil, a grand piano, a car, a truck, a bus, an airplane, a naval cruiser, and finally a train falling on top of Scootaloo and Silver Spoon. Oh and just to add more there goes the train as it gets derailed as you can't just look away, right into the rest of the crusaders. I do hope they can fix this and I hope Silver Spoon doesn't go crawling back to Diamond Tiara Scootaloo is the best thing for her and I have a feeling she will buck it up even more throughout the rest of the story : Which eventually I hope leads to a happy ending Look you made Fluttershy sad she really wants a happy ending and can you really deny that face I WANT MOAR SOON! If that is alright with you.
Wow, that was a great chapter. I see Applebloom can't keep get mouth shut.
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...goddamnit.
Welp, I'm sad and emotional now. Do you have to let the chapter on a note like that? I need more!
I always hate people using that excuse 'It ain't natural!'.... Go the fuck out in the woods and look! Animals will fuck anything in mating season when the opposite sex isn't there to mate with! Anyone that says animals don't fuck the same sex have never actually done much research into animals and nature. It's not the 'norm' and isn't how things will be in a perfect world of nature with same number of males and females and everyone getting a mate, but it DOES happen. You would think taking care of farm animals would know tho... But then again they probably arrange all the breeding themselves and don't like nature take over.
Besides... Ponies! Where is the Love and Tolerance!
Ohhh shite son!
5184509 So thats why my boy dogs rape eachother? It makes perfect sense!
Good show sir!
Now I'm off to lop off the head of a certain crusader :p
Naw, I get where you're 5177521 coming from. Sad as it is to say, some people have this so deeply ingrained in their morals that nothing can change their opinion. Even though you've basically said that'll change soon, I think it'll be a very unpleasant next few days, for the four of them.