Silver Spoon and Scootaloo could never get along. A class project forces them to.
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Robin Whinnyams
Very nice chapter. Some good catharsis there.
Fantastic chapter, I love this story. And you even put a Robin Williams thing in there thank you, and I can't wait for more
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Welp....just binged on the story so far! The last few chapters were good enough to ensure this story's entry to my favorites list!
....I hope this story continues with this excellent quality. You have my...undivided....attention.
You.
Bastard.
I <3 u
Good choice on the movies.
Oh you can just eat a dick
>Robin Whinnyams
My heart...
Robin Whinnyams, damn it man, or possibly woman, I had just stopped stopped feeling depressed about that. Now I need go watch Aladdin, or the Dead Poets Society, maybe Good will hunting if i feel up to it.
so much sad yet so much happy = awesome
>> Me
I told ya this was a story to break the mold.
>> Myself
Yeah yeah; he's a pretty good writer. I just wish for, you know...
>> I
The impossible?
>> Myself
An hourly update is not impossible!
In all seriousness, I love it. I especially love the way you portray the totally budding romantic relationship. I'm so glad I stumbled upon the prequel all that year ago.
Robin Whinnyans........Oh gosh.......he was fun-n-y Goodbye, you amazing actor.
Admit, the robin Williams reference pushed me over the edge. You are one of....about three authors on this site that are able to make me cry.
Anyways, I really needed this, just read the most recent chapter of a story that is quickly going from high quality copyright infringement to train wreck. This story however is always double platinum with solid diamond display case.
And now for my customary feels overload response.
I really need somebody to snuggle with, and after this chapter I need somebody's shoulder to cry on. Stupid repressed emotional issues.
These fic continues to be amazing. Loved this chapter so much, really hits you in the feels but in a good way. It's so great to be seeing SS becoming close with the crusaders.
Once again I'm at a loss at how you keep making me like/root for silver so much. Bravo sir
How could you do this to me?!
You monster.
But I'm glad the crusaders are getting along with Spoon. Good chapter is great.
AANNDD BAHBAHM!! "The Most Unlikely Places" is now officially the second mature rated fic that I have favorited(The first one is "Fallout: Equestria".) I have finally decided that this fic is of high enough quality that it, despite the mature rating, requires a place not only in my newly reorganized and cut down favorites list, but also on my user page in one of those fancy shmansy favorites display boxes. And furthermore! I shall do all in my meager power to spread awareness of this fix until the number of upvotes reaches at LEAST 1,000! (And if the "Fallout: Equestria" fix turns out half as good as me and my BNBFABFP(Best Non Brony Freind And Best Freind Period)/Prereader/Idea Sounding Board, think it's going to be I plan on using whatever following I gain to boost that number by another 500 upvotes.)
Few, needed to get that out of my system. I'm having an hyperactive energy spike, I'm jet lagged from coming back from Hawaii, and I think I may still have a bit of venom/poison/toxin in my system from those fifteen or so needles I got stuck with when I accidentally grabbed onto a sea urchin that was on the bottom of a small overhang of coral(Was using some dead coral as a hand hold so that I could stay nice and secure beneath an particularly vicious wave.)
Next on tonight's show, choose five fics that describe the various parts your psyche!
JK.
.......Actually now that I think about it, this could be extremely interesting. If Kiro says he doesn't mind we should totally make that a thing.
Toodles y'all, I'll be back later when I'm less manic.
ya
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This was a great chapter, glad this was the first one I got to after my 60k writing spree. I love how awesome the Crusader's were about the whole thing, still want Scoots to end up with Dashie. Since Silver Spoon isn't trinogamous. Still I hope that Scoots hooks Silver Spoon with a special somepony that'll make her happy, she'd be the best wingmare for her. Building up her confidence, making her feel like she's a pony worth knowing. And the crusader's really stepped up to the plate.
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I normally don't nitpick about grammar corrections but that one bugs me a little.
I live in a small town in the south and I hear people use "y'all" while referring to one person quite often.
It may not be the correct use of the word but it still sees a good bit of use.
Anyways, now that I'm done nitpicking. Things are starting to pick up a bit and now I really can't wait to read the next chapter.
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Well as a person whose lived in the south for 95% of my life and never heard it used singularly. It's something that drives me utterly insane. And people who claim to use it singularly online, are people I correct. Especially since the term, where it originated meant You All [Ye Aw [Scottish], before moving over to America where it became a contraction of you all. Y'all.
So if a person's going to use it. They better use it right. That and it confuses the ever loving Fk out of me. To see a person use that word wrong. Because, having used it correctly all of my life. It's physically jarring to see a person talk to one person as if they were talking to many. Since I'm left wondering just who in the hell they are talking to besides the targeted person.
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We have had opposite experiences with people using the word for quite a while. I know the way it's supposed to be used but I've heard it used both correctly and incorrectly for the majority of my life.
But this wasn't meant to start a debate, since I do agree that it's used incorrectly, it just doesn't bother me to read it used either way.
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My problem is that I have actual OCD [not hipster OCD], and seeing it used wrong will bother me for days if I don't say anything. That and the author and me talked last chapter. (S)He speed writes, and doesn't have time to edit it. And I'll catch it and point it out if it's used wrong ... although it's the authors perogative to change it or not.
Anywho have a good day, and take care.
This chapter honestly hit deep.
I actually have epilepsy, for about 5 years now. It's been an eternal burden on my life and it's caused my whole world to change. I remember one time in the early days that my condition developed, I was sitting in my computer chair reading FimFiction when suddenly I just felt... odd... I got up but then I started lying down then the next thing I know, I'm a twitching mass on the ground and it feels as if suddenly every single nerve ending in my body has suddenly lit itself on fire. I'd never cried so hard in my life. It was, by and far, the most painful experience I've ever had, nothing has, and probably never will, compare to what I felt that night.
Now I have the constant fear that, at any point in time, I could die, hell, it could happen after I type this, I honestly don't know. Now I have to worry about my actions and how they could affect me. I'm near sighted, I get constant migraines, I'm afflicted with depression, stress, anxiety and I have trouble in social situations. I also have stomach problems and it's even affected my confidence and personality.
But you know what, I'm not letting rule my life. Sure I get up every morning and every night to take my meds and I can't have caffeine anymore, though I sneak a Pepsi or Mountain Dew sometimes. I'm still gonna play video games for long hours of the day, I'm still gonna eat fast food and sugary stuff and I will sometimes stay up later than I should. All in all, what's the point in living if you let one thing control your life forever?
Now that I've given you my life story, I should probably share my thoughts on the story.
Overall, I thought that chapter was well executed and you have continued to deliver a quality reading experience that I can't wait to continue.
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I'm really sorry to hear that. Epilepsy is a poorly understood disease for those who don't have it or know someone who does, but it is as disruptive and unpleasant for those afflicted as any other whole-body affliction, especially considering the inherent mental consequences. Kudos to you for soldiering on in the face of what is, at its heart, a pretty shitty roll of the health dice.
I hadn't initially intended to give Starlight any specific illness. I was just going to have her die of nebulous 'disease' and leave it up to the reader to fill in the blank. There was some understanding that it would likely read as 'cancer' if I did that, and I eventually decided I wanted to give her a more specific cause of death. I am a little disappointed in myself that I ended up shoehorning in a tumor to be the root source of her epilepsy, but my initial choice of SUDEP seemed unwise. SUDEP is relatively rare and generally unknown to most people, so while it's clearly more horrible and shocking, it also could read as a fake death just because people don't realize it's totally a thing. (I assume/hope you already knew of it, because if you didn't, I'm afraid I might have given you something else to worry about D:)
Urghhhh....
One of my family members died of epilepsy....I didn't know him that well but..well, i saw his last fit. It was..horrible. Dear god...He just..didn't stop...and when he did...ugh...So many nightmares.
This fic is so good <3 looking forward to seeing more
This was an amazingly heartwrenching chapter. At the same time, I can't wait for the next chapter, but I don't want this story to end.
4964497 Examples? I'm always looking for ways to improve.
I'm really enjoying this. The premise, the emotions, the building of relationships, and I think what I enjoy most of all is getting to see that silver spoon shine brightly as all of the grime is wiped off of it.
I can't wait for more.
4973467 it's not fair to imply that Silver Spoon's intelligence is limited, because it isn't. She's perfectly intelligent, just short on opportunity, support, and help. She sees the Crusaders as bullies because they have been. Some time ago, the dynamic shifted away from the one-sided cruelty of Sugar Lump on Crusader and more towards Diamond Tiara vs Crusader on Silver Spoon. Her perspective is also colored by their initial interactions, explored in more detail in my other story, Diamond in the Rough.
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Scootaspoon is like, the rarest ship there is. I doubt 4chan will waste their (ample) free time voting on it.
Dagnabbit, I haven't cried this much since Grave of the Fireflies.
Oh my god this is one of my favorite stories and it keeps getting better. Please keep it up.
Need... More... Updates...
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It's on the way, I promise!
This latest chapter has been a big problem for me. I finally hit a breakthrough the other day, so I got a lot of work done on it, but there's still some tinkering to be done. There are a couple gaps in the narrative that need to be patched, a few scenes that need to be shortened or cut, and then a lot of stuff to fill in, but it'll be done soon. I'd guess...a week? I usually write at work, and we've been really busy, so I haven't had a lot of time to write, unfortunately. I'll do my best to get a good chapter out.
I promise it'll be worth the wait. Lots of fun, some drama, some exposition, some clop.
All good!
5043592 WOOOO!
4862628 watch all three at the same time. I'll have to settle for What Dreams may Come, Aladdin, and Mrs. Doubtfire. Maybe Bicentennial Man if I can find a working VHS player.
The moment heard about them watching TV, I immediately though,"The Birdcage".
Then I heard "Robin Whinnyams". I thought,"Called it!".
If u r too stupid to get the joke, the Birdcage is a Robin Williams movie about gay people.
Very Gay people.
Ah
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I honestly look forward to seeing Silver talk to Luna in her dreams. It's something she could seriously use. I mean what with Deets, and her father being who they are. The feelings of loneliness and being less than a shadow. All the craziness in her life. Having a friend in Luna, introduced via Crusader, would be very interesting to see.
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The y'all's that were here need to be fixed still.
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Same errors as last time.
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I seriously look forward to more of this.
Seriously though. This is a very touching chapter ^_^.
Well, that was an emotional scene that was....
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*Nods* 7th reread, and I still cry when I read this chapter.