Equestria is dead. Using massive weapons of utter destruction, the Caribou have killed all but a handful of ponies, including Princess Twilight. But leaving the Princess of Magic alive was folly. After all, love conquers all. Even death.
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So there's an eldritch abomination aiding the Caribou...
Ash'ei is Spike!
A dragon that's purple and green aiding the Caribou? No....it can't be.
Green and puprle.... Spike????
4976164 I have a feeling that the end of Chapter 12 just answered that question.
At least...I'm thinking so.
But if that is Spike, he seems more than a little...off.
Which is putting it mildly.
Please say he's just possessed.
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There is an eldritch abomination inhabiting spike and aiding the caribou.
So, something has (apparently) possessed Spike? Not good!
4977845 That's what I'm hoping, too.
The big question that I have, though is...if is does prove to be Spike, then how in the heck did those Caribou dirtbags even get their filthy hooves on him in the first place?!
That's what I wanna know!
Ash'ei might be Spike possessed by Nightmare, methinks...
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Well this just got interesting. All 5 alicorns meeting up at the Crystal Empire. But they'll have to deal with him...
if it is spike maybe Ash’ei is a source of all evil that changes bodies if so maybe the first host was a tirak then sombra then luna then ? now spike
Well it seems that Spike has finally shown his true colors , hopefully Twilight will be able to do what is needed to end this evil.
That is so obviously Spike, and I think he's just playing tricks with the Caribou
4978109 Or whatever it is is possessing his corpse like a necromorph. Twilight did seem pretty damn upset when she mentioned Spike earlier in the story.
WTF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I was also thinking about the dragons and buffulo. Especially the buffulo since thier lands were in equestria territory.
Oh dang. The plot has thickened tremendously. I really can't wait for the next chapter now!
~ Super-Brony12
I have five major problems with this quote:
1. Patroness is not a word. Patron's feminine form is MATRON. Patron, matron. Padre, madre. Father, mother.
2. As a self-proclaimed fan of The Dark Elf Saga, you should DAMN well know the above what with every drow house being run by the redundantly-titled Matron-Mother of that family.
3. Matron of Orphan is not a proper title or honorific. This should be either 'Matron of the Orphaned' or 'Matron of Orphans' depending on the writer's preference.
4. This garbled honorific was not caught in proofreading or by an editor.
5. I hate being brought completely out of an otherwise engrossing story with great care given to being descriptive enough where I can actually see it happening as I read by glaring errors.
Now to go back and finish reading.
Well sincei ts an endless blackness, I'm betting Spike is possess by a demon. Though I wonder if it was before or after the war.
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Thank you for catching that!
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red herring
Err... that... that does not look good at all.
possessed spike. not bad.
¡Ay güey!
4977807 I'm not so sure the stories been great so far I don't think the writer would be so Lazy as to use the spike is possessed or gone evil cliche in the story I'm pretty sure this is just a red herring and the writer has something very unique and clever plan for this
4979534 Hmmm, you could be right, but I guess that we'll just have to wait and see, huh?
On the other hoof, just how many dragons are the in the MLP Universe (or in this one, for that matter) that have a purple and green color-scheme?
Food for thought, that.
Although I'm sure that you're right about Taelea's plan.
My guess is they captured Spike and used his body as a medium for the gods/demons the caribou follow.
Almost every thing the caribou have done has involved corruption of some kind.
Not to mention the psychological benefit of using Spike against his friends.
4979604 while that's true I think the whole color scheme thing is just they way to throw us off I mean the whole evil spike thing is so cliche that it would kind of ruin the story at this point
4979712 Hmmm, that could be, too.
We'll just have to wait and see, I guess.
4979534 i dont think spike going evil is cliche yet. i haven't read any stories like that yet...i mean other than ones where he follows twilight to evildom
I see a Twilight VS Spike showdown in the future. Well... that would be a first time I read about the two of them being in completely opposing sides. Or maybe this is just a red herring...
Either way, I can't wait for when Twilight meets the other Princesses next!
4979778 trust me from stores I have read on here and stories I have read on fanfiction it has become a cliche
did not see that coming my self. and can not wait to see what happens when they find out what twilight has done.
That isn't Spike, maybe it's his body, but that's not Spike. They called him an avatar after all, that suggests that Ash'ei is being channelled through this dragon (Spike or otherwise).
So, Cadence and Shining Armor have managed to keep a shield up for over twenty years? Impressive!
I'm also wondering what Twilight wants with the Crystal Heart?
I'm hoping the less obvious route is taken here. Maybe Spike is just exploiting their superstitious nature? He seemed pretty pleased (more like indifferent I suppose) at the pony victory, and having god/evil spirit status among the Carribou could prove useful.
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I guess she wants the Heart for her grand resurrection scheme. Since one of the Heart's properties is to spread is energy over a very wide area, I imagine she has figured out a way to channel the Elements through the Heart to perform a country-wide resurrection at once.
I mean, she will have a whole country of undead ponies in line for resurrections - many millions of them. She can't very well blast each and every one of them with Elements (even if they could get a couple of individuals with each shot), that would take forever and a half to accomplish.
Using the Heart though, she might be able to nail an at least Crystal Empire-sized area at once, so it's a matter of gathering the whole population of undead there and blasting them all at once.
At least that's my theory so far.
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You know any off hand? I've never read or seen a story with an evil Spike in it before.
4980990 That's not a bad theory. It may also have something to do with the Heart spreading love, and Twilight is using love necromancy. Maybe she wants to use the Heart on it's own, with love necromancy to ressurrect all of Equestria's dead at once. Then later bring them back to life (instead of being undead) with the Elements.
"A lot"
"goddesses"?
Interesting introduction of the god. I was thinking there would not really be anything, most of the gods in the MLP world seem to be actually alive and very personable.
Finally UTD! great story! i can't say that i'm that worried about Cadence or Shining, i'm more worried about Twi meeting Celestia.
Spike possessed by and eldritch abomination / evil god, this is gonna be interesting to say the least.
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This isn't necessarily a bad thing if handled well.
*Reads description*
... Why is this fic in the Alternate Conversion Bureau group?
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I... am not really sure.
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You should probably PM them about that.
5010520 Yeah, I do, too. Keeping them all un-living for now is a great way to see that they don't end up really dead before all is said and done at the end of this rather wild ride.
Great work so far, Taelea-love! Can't wait to see what happens next!
Speaking of, when can we expect the next chapter? After that rather dramatic reveal at the end of this one, I can't wait for it to see what you have in store for us next!
I'm surprised that the princesses havnt returned to the rest yet, but that is fine, they will eventually.
5068096 "She", who?
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The only one who could with some mere words derail everything if she decides something is wrong.
Celestia