• Member Since 10th Apr, 2012
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Kryptonian


I am just a city boy. I was born and raised in southern region of Detroit. One day I took a train, at around midnight, and I had no idea where it was going.

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A grey pegasus arrives in Ponyville
But something about him raises suspicion in the ponies.
It seems that everypony in town has seen him everywhere around Equestria
They soon find out what he is hiding.
I decided that the ending for my fic, Questions, didn't really explain much. This is the same fic, except i rewrote the ending. If you want to read the original ending, it is still up. Please give an honest rating, and leave feedback

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 7 )

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A for effort but having a black pony OC doesn't make a cool story needs more fibre

>>Kryptonian dont care

Harsh. Condemned for a crime he didn't commit, and for what? (If I read correctly, that is)
I like both endings. Mainly because there's no "Everything is going to be alright" in either of them. Kinda makes the story.

Nice story. Nice endings. Both sad though. Ones a don't return kind and the others a no love but you get life. Anyway nice story. Godspeed and goodluck.

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i tried to make the first ending less sad than the second one. glad you liked them

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