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Kryptonian
I am just a city boy. I was born and raised in southern region of Detroit. One day I took a train, at around midnight, and I had no idea where it was going.
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What exactly did he do to deserve this?
I love it! But, I cant stand cliffhangers... :c
Unfortunatly I can't read it tonight, but I'll fav it and read it Tommorow. It sounds really iteresting
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I'll probably write an ending tonight, judging by all of the negative votes, im guessing I shouldnt have done that, dont worry, I wouldnt leave this like that, now would I?
A handful of spelling and grammar mistakes, and you could add more detail and emotion into dialogue too, but intersting story and I'm excited to learn more and see where you take this. Also you could probably break a few of those paragraphs down a bit more, but still loved it
438432
yeah, i have a problem with proof reading. I will probably do a MUCH better job if I write another fic. thanks for the feedback
438539 anytime, I always enjoy a good OC fic
ME GUSTA STORY! *reads as he types derpy story*
MAY THE POWER OF BROHOOF COMPEL YOU!
I'm sorry but I can't accept this ending. We need a happier ending my friend, this is too sad for my taste. I'm sure you were aiming for that but still, I hate sad fluttershy. And more details on his "crime" would be a good idea
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Yeah, i kinda rushed the ending a bit didnt I. I dont really feel like writing an epilogue to an epilogue though, sorry. I did say in the categories that this was a sad story. I tried to make the ending as happy as possible, because Krypton was all depressed in the 2nd log, i couldnt just have him get over his whole life shattered so quickly. i dont know, if more people ask for a better ending, than i will probably change it
438432
thanks for taking the time to read it.
438589 Dont get me wrong, it was a good ending, maybe its just the mood I'm in or something. You dont have to take my comment seriously if you dont want
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no, its fine, i didnt like the way it ended either. well, i did, but, when i started writing this, i didnt think it would end like that. actually, copying over all the mistakes in the writing i made, i reread the story, and it kinda made me feel sad as well.
Hmm so that's the end story if it is there should be something more to it, but the part I don't get was why did everypony hated him I was lost right there.
So... WHY is he an outcast? I didn't get that...
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Second chapter, also, if you dont like that ending, then Im writing another alternate ending
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Ah. He's a killer but he did it all for a reason?
If you'd like. Not because if you feel pressured to do so.
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Naw, its alright. I feel like if you want to see a happier ending, the first one is better. But if you want to find out more about Krypton, the second one is.
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Alright, cool.
Awesome! Really good. Godspeed and goodluck.
Awesome. So hes a killer, heh? With a heart. But still... Godspeed and goodluck.
So, he is a killer? You said that's the 'rumors' but not the truth, so he isn't? But... ugh, nevermind.
But... don't get me wrong, I love the story, and the epilogue, but I just... don't get it. I know you don't want an epilogue to and epilogue , so I'll stick to whatever I can come up with and say that's what you mean. :p