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Saint Ragnarok


The details of my life are quite inconsequential.

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It is Dinky Doo's first day of School and she couldn't be more excited. Her loving mother and Ponyville's Mail-mare, Ditzy Doo, drops her off and heads off to work. However, when her classmates make fun of Her mother and deceased father, Dinky loses it and hits another filly. Enraged at her daughters actions, Ditzy scolds her. daughter. Fearing her mother doesn't love her anymore, Dinky runs away. However this is only the beginning of their troubles. When Ditzy and the Mane 6 rescue Dinky from an almost certain death at the paws of one of the dangerous beasts of the Everfree forest, the other ponies in Ponyville decide that Ditzy is not a fit mother and they have Dinky Doo taken away. With the help of Twilight Sparkle, DItzy fights an unfair legal battle as well as her own demons. Even though Ditzy and Dinky face the prospect of never seeing each other again, this story shows just how strong the bond between mother and daughter can be.

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Comments ( 18 )

Oh, crap......it isn't easy being Ditzy at the best of times and I fear we're in for a rough spell.

.it isn't easy being Ditzy

#3 · Oct 2nd, 2011 · · ·

:pinkiesad2::fluttershysad::fluttercry::applecry::raritydespair::raritycry::fluttershbad: Fuck.... Im a little girl and no i lost all my manliness. Goddammit i want to hug ditzy

I hope you actually plane to finish this, and not just leave it in this state labeled as complete. And what's with all the white space at the end?

Overall, an interesting premise. I look forward to seeing the rest.

:applecry::fluttercry::fluttershysad::pinkiesad2: poor Ditzy, life is just so damn hard for her, and as for that colt, i think someone needs to club him into submission. *steals blackjack from random guy on the street and hunts colt down.

... I hope this doesn't turn into a grimdark.
I can imagine the scene right now, Ditzy snapping after she found her daughter, mauled to death by a Manticore.
In rage, I bet she would go berserk on the other ponies. Or failing that, commit suicide after she finds that Dinky fled, after an exhausting failed search, leaving Dinky without a mother.... What? I am not cynical am I?

Augh... I just read the summary....
I feel very foolish now.

so, you said you would finish this, i hope you do because i just spent one of my classes reading this story and loved it.

So... What's with the huge blank space at the end of the chapter. And just when do you plan on adding the next chapter.

#10 · Dec 1st, 2011 · · ·

:flutterrage: Please for the love of god finish this. This shit pulled at my heartstrings :fluttercry:

Celestia, this makes me think of My Little Dashie somehow. But... I didn't cry. I felt like it, but I didn't. And damn, this seems like a completely unfair situation for Ditzy.

Wow, that was very touching. But, actually, Ditzy's grandfather being a unicorn and passing the unicorn to Ditzy's daughter makes %100 sense. :twilightsmile:

This story says complete. Whaat? It's clearly not finished yet. Things in the description haven't happened yet :twilightoops:

Anyhow, here's to hoping the story isn't over yet, because this was a solid start :twilightsmile:

Loved the start. I really hope that you finish it!

Argon314

This isn't the story I thought it was...

THAT'S HOW IT ENDS!?!?!?!?

-Sees the ending to this story looks at the description, puts a gun to his head and pulls the triger-

Is it bad I thought of killing somepony over twenty times in this story.

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