Rust is the leader of the marine squad called ARROW. After an attempt to blow up a covenant jammer, he finds himself in the middle of a forest with no way to contact the UNSC INFINITY.
He soon comes across another species neither the human race or the covenant know about. Perhaps even a new world and discovers the meaning of peace for perhaps the first time in his life.
However he is not the only living being from Requiem who has discovered this new world. An old enemy that Rust had barely escaped from the covenant war years ago has found him once more.
*Cover image found on Google.*
Chapters (8)
great starter keep up the work
It is well made, but the only part I thought was bland was this "But I have to do this otherwise they'll follow you through the portal and kill you" I think it would have work if he just said "But I have to do this otherwise they'll follow you through the portal", the reader will still get the idea Take a look at this and you will get a good idea about word choice and expostion
Good story and well written. Nice
This is what happens when you send marines to do a Spartans and or army soldiers job.
Lol nice fic dude. Please don't go on hiatus cause I cant wait to read more.
The title should probably be "A Marine's Peace"
Do More!
he'll feel that in the morning!
great work! keep it up, hope to see more soon!
Ace out
Bery nice gerd ser
Can't wait for next part
what happened to Forrest Gump
great,nuff said
Any new on update?
2809609 Sorry about the delay. The holidays started yesterday for me so I have more time to work on it now. It should be done by the end of this week
2810827 Cool... It seems like its gonna be a great story.
Those damned ponies aren't sharing a lot of friendship lol.
Remember, if they catch him, humans are the predators not ponies so don't make anything too harsh on their half.
YES NEW UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Return with post haste dear author! Have fun in Scotland.
have fun in Scotland
...Does this mean it's going on Hiatus?
Try in write while in Scotland will ya?
Good, but in my opinion he was wayyyyy too forgiving.
When is the next chapter coming out? This was cool.
I feel guilty when I'm reading stories I like because I always forget to like them ...
2865016 I found it acceptable since they hadn't done anything too drastic. Plus thanks to the might of humanity, they didn't even scratch him so.
Aye yes Scotland is a great land. Go to aberdeen its beautiful there.
AUGH! FINALLY! IT IS HERE! HUZZAH!
*10 min. later after reading*
Fuuuuuuu
1) good chapter not the best but good
2)another Pinkie 4th wall breakage, im starting to hate stories with that now
ERROR SMASH HEAD ON KEYBOARD TO CONTINUE...
........recent updates have decreased quality for all my favs...
i have a feeling that there more going on then we no
write moar its getting good
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Agreed. After all, he was just defending himself the entire time. Let's also not forget that humanity almost got wiped out due to the Covenant. So first contact with a new race would have humanity being significantly more cautious than normal.
Do you mind if I ask why you've written a Halo crossover?
There are already so very, very many of them that it seems as if any potential idea has been completely done to death.
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no we need more halo
Make more ponies see it instead of just Twilight
....kay
not bad keep em comin
Awesome! Keep up the good work!
Well at least its not gilty sparck
What department of the navy may I ask (I'm not very military savvy so I don't know if department is the right word,but you probably get what I mean)
Joining the squiddies, huh? Good luck. You're going to need it when you cross the equator for the first time. My father is former Navy, and he gave me some horror stories about what his ship's crew did to him and the others when they crossed it for the first time...
It gives me nightmares to this day...
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It sort of works. The Department of the Navy is an actual organization. Do you mean unit (as in what fleet, base and ship you are assigned) or rating (your specific job, ex: sonar technician, intelligence analyst, MP)?
Glad to see an update :)
Hope you get to test out the railings!(I am not shutting you, there got them now, prototypes at least, and the kick ass)
Two authors in the same month?
4045549 Their conscripting bronies.
4044506 (sorry for late reply) what I meant was his specific job in the navy, I don't know why but I just couldn't find the words in my head
He wasn't lying, he had slept in woods, destroyed buildings, even inside of a covenant super carrier but that was a story for another time.
I wouild actually like to see a chapter on how he slept in those conditions
Okay, great story, love how it's going. Two downsides, however. One, it is in severe need of editing for all the grammar and spelling errors. Two, it hasn't been updated in about six months.
HAHAHAHaHaHaHahahahaha...ha? What? It's funny the way you wrote it!
Wow.
Much dead.
Very lifeless. Such insides.
Interesting