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Rainbow Dash, the fastest flyer in all of Equestria, has been the face of Pegasi for many years. However, when an incident goes from bad to worse, she slowly starts to believe that the curse can easily become a blessing. With her friends becoming worried about her erratic behavior and not knowing the truth, how long will she go before being stopped? An even better question, will she be stopped?

A.N. There will be a chapter posted everyday until it ends, enjoy the story everypony!

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 12 )

A wild rock appears! Rock uses fall. It's super effective! (I hope I got this right, I played those games YEARS ago :rainbowlaugh:)


Nice story!

4781284 I haven't played them in a long time either, but I'm pretty sure you got it right :rainbowlaugh:
And thanks! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story :scootangel:

:moustache: yes quite that is how it goes flying-claw.

Nice chapter! I like the idea about her having lost her colors. Keep up the great work!

4785270 thanks! If you like that, then you'll enjoy what's coming up for the rest of the story:raritywink:

Ending feels like a cross between rushed and incomplete. Will Twilight go crazy like RD did? Are RD and Flutters actually dead? Where/how did RD get the "Colorsnatcher"? What made the oven fall?

So many questions are left in my mind...
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Maby that's what he was going for?:derpyderp1:

i'm really sorry, but this story seems to have no pacing in it at all.

5724808 It's fine, this was a while ago and my writing has gotten better. I appreciate the feedback either way, thank you for being respectful with it!

A spell that heals you but takes way all of your color? That makes no sense what so ever. Well looks like the spa ponies are gonna have one hell of a dye job on their hooves.

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