I, Show Stopper, have been commissioned by Princess Twilight Sparkle to compile a brief chronicle of this era in history, the era of the birth of Equestria, the rise, reign, and defeat of Discord, and the foalhood of the sister princesses.
Learn of the parents of Princess Celestia and Princess Luna. Learn why Discord became what he became. Learn what forces ruled the world before the rise of Equestria. Learn the fate of two great races: the Alicorns and the Draconequi.
Learn of the Arcane Era of Equestria.
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Pretty entertaining story, and a nice take on the pre-sisters rule.
7.5 / 10
only a few errors too.
"As the was continued, many Alicorns and ponies fell to disease, starvation, and the general disasters caused by Discord's magic."
What's with the beginning of that sentence?
"Celestia began to raise the sun every morning, while Luna raised the mon every evening."
Luna gets the "mon" up every evening? SEEN ENOUGH TO KNOW WHERE THEY'RE GOING!
Just kidding ya.
Lol wish I knew how to quote the story.
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Thanks for the edits. Spread the word, spread the love.
Show Stopper;
I am glad I could be of service.
Thank you for this wonderful tale. Hopefully you found my suggested grammatical edits useful.
Cheers :D