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TundraStanza


The Poetic Frost makes mistakes so that you don't have to. "Dance, Sode no Shirayuki!"

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Not very many ponies knew about the pony that strives to be Ponyville's first ice archer medalist. Not very many ponies recognized the potential in Archer.
Tootsie Flute is not very many ponies.
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As a sort of side-quel to "But... That's My Big Brother", "Center of a Tootsie Flute" explores the innocent love interest that one filly has on another.
One-shot.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 16 )

*sees tags: "Other"*

I really hate how shite this system works. I can't wait till they replace this. Just another story that will be lost to the abyss of nothingness when someone searches for an Archer or other character story just because there aren't as many fanfics or art for them out or gotten enough screen time. So dumb. So very very dumb.

She wants to know what love is?

'Daaaw, cute.

I love ho Archer is completely oblivious.

Tootsie is adorable :heart:

so author u say u cant write a proper romance well u seem 2 b doing a great job sir so I want 2 c that author note removed:twilightsmile:also who is Tootsie grandmother I was just curious after reading that part but great job and I read those fanfics with DT and SS and enjoyed them but I still dont like them:pinkiehappy:

and do make a sepuel 2 this or "But... That`s My Big Brother" if u dont mind I :heart:both of them and dont want 2 c the journy end here so please:fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry:Im begging u

I'm curious about who the various relatives are, but regardless, both of these fics were very good, and very cute. I wouldn't mind seeing more of Archer and Tootsie. :pinkiehappy:

Your cover image has colt eyes. O3o

5522607 , Excuse me while I go fix that.

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It's a minor nitpick. Trixie and Chrysalis have colt-style eyes (without gradient).

Cute!!!! :heart: :pinkiehappy: But it doesn't need to be rated T, you know. :raritywink: E rated audiences could still read this.

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I think Mommy is Amethyst Star Sparkler (she was seen having a picnic with Tootsie Flute in the Mysterious Mare Do Well, so it lead to one HC that she's Toots' mom). It's quite obvious that Mommy's Mom, the pegasus who dropped by, is Derpy (after all, it's another HC that Sparkler is Derpy's daughter).

Now that I have come to the conclusion that either Derpy is older than she looks or Sparkler had a teenage pregnancy, I have mixed feelings now....

Unless Sparkler's adopted

Aww, this was cute. You captured a schoolyard crush between Archer and Tootsie so well! It's just adorable! She came across as very authentically child-like. Do you plan on ever writing more of them?

Omg why is Tootsie so adorable.:rainbowkiss:

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